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Published: 2009-06-10 19:14:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1678; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 42
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Finally got the background in there. Let me know what you think!Related content
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Looks great Dave! A minor critique relating to how a few of the character elements overlap with the background:
I'd recommend shifting the trail of the flying character so it brakes the plain of the building and "pops" more. The tracer fire aligns with the sign, which pulls it into the BG. I think shifting the tracer toward the center a little would help alleviate that. Above the blast impact on the ground, there are two silhouette figs in the far BG that form an odd shape with the blast. If they get faded out in the coloring it won't be an issue, but for the pencils it may help to move them or make them outlines.
Here's a link to a marked up version for a visual reference:
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Thanks for letting me post my suggestions David, I hope they help. It's a fantastic piece!
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Ah, I totally agree! Hmm. If there's a way I would like to fit this in the book, somewhere. Fact is, I developed the BG separate from the rest of the image to better show the perspective steps. Thank you for sharing!
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No problem! I'm glad my suggestions helped.
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Darnit David.... Now I have a whole new skill set to learn off you. Whens the book out?
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The schedule says June, but who pays attention to those?
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I like to think of schedules more as guidelines than actual to the letter rules.
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