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CommanderEVE [2011-02-22 21:11:46 +0000 UTC]
I like the texture on the larger planet although I think that it's lit why to much since the light source isn't that close. You should bring the light source closer so it looks more natural for the whole piece, also you have a moon there with the same texture as the planet, you should change it to something different also the smaller the moon/planet the smaller the atmosphere it has, so the moon would have a thiner atmosphere then the larger planet. So giving it a rocky texture would look great, also the bigger the texture you find and the more you can re-size it and make it smaller the better it will look in your piece. Also it's good to make the cloud layer separate from the texture player. So duplicate the cloud texture, the first cloud layer give it a small drop shadow so it gives it a little depth between the texture and the clouds as if the clouds are above the land. The second cloud layer set it to overlay and give it a emboss. That will make the clouds look 3D.
The composition of the piece is a little bit to tall for me as my eyes are going every where, try and make it shorter and bring in the nebula closer to the planet and moon. The nebula isn't very bright so try to ad more players and define the nebula more, make it brighter in the direction of the light that hits the planet. each bit you add to the nebula do in a different layer, that will make it look layered. As for the stars. it looks like just a noise filter, so try to remove some of the finer stars in the background and add some brighter ones with in the bright places of the nebula. (If you are going to make it brighter.) I find that adding the stars outside the nebula where it's really dark helps, it's also good to have some parts of the nebula that are black, that creates good contrast.
But overall I think you have got really good from your other pieces. Nice work and keep it up.
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CommanderEVE In reply to DexausMelmac [2011-02-22 21:37:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And you are welcome!
Yeah stars are very hard, I still cannot be bothered to do a good starfeild these days. XD
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CommanderEVE In reply to DexausMelmac [2011-02-22 22:02:25 +0000 UTC]
LOL It's funny what BlPh said about my PC burning though the floor.
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DexausMelmac In reply to CommanderEVE [2011-02-26 19:27:49 +0000 UTC]
i am lolling at the level of lols in this series of lol based comments.
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Stalast1ck [2010-11-26 12:34:04 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, can I has 1080p wallpaper of that epic blue swirly?
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DexausMelmac In reply to Stalast1ck [2010-11-28 19:18:49 +0000 UTC]
Give me time, you impatient r3t4rD.
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