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Published: 2012-03-09 05:18:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 737; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 7
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spent all day working on this imageas much as i would love to use her as a character her mere existence would create a paradox
i realise the image may look off but thats because she doesnt have much fur beneath her neck at the beginning of it.
name:Talon
gender:female
family:jetran(father)
breedings: open 15
pups:2-3
special traits: bloodline contains dna for a long tail. while she herself has a short tail. pups in her litters can have either long short or normal length tails.
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Hey Devildart, I absolutely love this wolf. It is MUCH better than anything that I could have drawn. I do not know how you manage to make such amazing things on the computer. Anyways, everything about Talon is great. I love the way he is postured, his coloring, and his overall design.
Now, with all those ups, there are a few slight downs. I have pretty much nothing to complain about, but there are some slight things that I would tweak. On Talons muzzle, you may or may not notice that there is the normal shape, and then a small bulge right on top. This may not be an error; it could be a battle wound. Also, on the back legs. The leg on Talon's right looks perfect, but on his left back leg, it seems rather formless. Usually, it would have more curve than that, you know? Although the highlights do help, I believe the leg could have a little more curve. I think that is all. Hope you enjoyed my critique! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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i will admit i did have trouble with the leg but the head was shaped that way on purpose i tend to prefer my characters have something unusual in their structure to make them stand out from the rest of the cast. im assuming the bulge youre talking about is either the muzzle or the eyebrow ridge canines have.
both were done knowingly.
btw talon is a female
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oh. i kinda missed that. but i do love your drawing of her ;D
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sure send the points and ill add you to the list
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got them. ill send you a link once completed.
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i may request a breeding with her also, but i shall wait to see the other pups first
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XD well shes 15 points for a breeding and when the litter is done you pay 3 points for the ones you want...im kind of a point whore arent i?
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yes any traits you want the pups to have in particular? note not only his traits but the tail traits talon has on her as well
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hmm the horns would be nice. other then that it's all up to you
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okay
the tablet died today so if you dont mind i kinda need to use premade lineart now as a result (obviously ill edit it to fit the traits)
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there you go
pick the ones you want -w-
theres no limit to the amount i just really dont want to feel like im forcing all on you if theres a design you dont like
i honestly feel like one of them should be talisman dont know why -w-
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I'll consider breeding with her, she's got a beautiful design, Just gotta figure out who x3
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im sure youll come up with a character very interestingly designed for me to use -w-
thank you for that i had fun with this image so i have a little pride in it
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