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Detkef — the experiment
Published: 2013-05-19 01:13:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 10951; Favourites: 509; Downloads: 76
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finals for my perspective class
had to make a two page comic showing of different types of perspective. decided not to put in any dialogue, it doesn't really need it.
I was thinking about making a full comic out of the plot, does it look promising?
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Totally. I'm just on the edge of m seat for what's next. What happened to him? How did he get into that situation?
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Just to clarify; I'm no expert. If you can come up with a fresh story line that really draws the reader in, I'd say 'go for it.'
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Rogue cyborgs are kind of an overused plot, but the work itself is very nice!
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It looks awesome! It is very promising! (and I love the wolverine type jump in the last panel :3 )
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Thrilling work!
I think "Poorest security protocol ever!" is likely to be this unlucky scientist's last thoughts.
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Lovely work! Definitely peaks my interest, I would love to see more. c:
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By any chance were these drawings inspired by The Hidden Source Mod?
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This is just mind blowing. So many different perspectives and yet not going overboard. Good work!
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It does look promising. In fact, you could make a full comic out of this. Try integrating it into the story of Zombie Waffe. Then I'll be happy (seriously, you really need to update that comic a lot more often).
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Your perspective work is wonderful. It makes the limited color scheme appear dynamic and adds to the atmosphere of the piece as a whole. I'd love to see more.
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Very promising. Feel like "Monster" by Skillet would be a good song for this.
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Looks like the classic "human experiment goes wrong", but it looks very interesting nontheless. Also, I think you did a good job with the perspective and the characters themselves ^^
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Yes, if you have the time, making this full comic would be awesome!!
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Can you do both this and Zombie Waffe? Cause this looks very promising. Heck maybe you could tie this into zombie waffe. Make this story a prologue of ZW maybe?
Also, I've been meaning to ask, what does waffe stand for/mean?
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LOVE IT!!
You sooooooooo HAVE to make this into a comic!!
Was this inspired by 'Containment Breach'?
I've seen a little gameplay online and except for it being scientists and not prisoners in the test chamber, (and the fact that the expirement dosn't look like a scary burlap gummybear) It looks VERY promising and I hope you continue to work on this!
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Eat it up, wear it out. Make it do or do without.
Curiosity killed the cat, Satisfaction brought it back.
Save the Earth, it's the only planet with chocolate!
When in doubt, FRAG OUT!!
Pay it forward.
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And this, boys and girls, is what happens when man plays God.
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The detail you put in each panel is amazing! Great job, I would absolutely love to read more!
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Yes! It looks very promising! I love all of their expressions, and the deatil you've managed to put in while still leaving the painted effect. Please make more!
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I like. No dialogue is good, Lighting and texture... Just wow, and the perspectives are awesome! Second page soon then I take it? I'd love to see more of this.
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sorry this is both pages, but put together!
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Had a feeling. Still marvelous.
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Aah! Looks like that mod fro Half Life The Hidden 
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Am I the ONLY one who sees that this is based off of the source mod "The Hidden"?
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Oh My Guard, that so awesome, i didn't realize that!
But then again, the mechanical arm kind of threw me of the trail.
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Do continue! But perhaps with the events that happened before the ones in this comic?
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Continue? Yes please. Please please please!
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I would love it if you would continue the comic. I'm darned curious to see what happens next.
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Whoa, this is amazing. The coloring is absolutely gorgeous and the perspective is amazing! Good luck on your finals!
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this is interesting, you should do the other pages to explain whats going on, who is the one with the robot arm and how did he get in that situation, well that my opinion
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I love this so much, I can't help but think of all these questions that I want answered like...
What where the scientists trying to achieve?
Was the experiment born into being an experiment or a normal person who got kidnapped into being an experiment?
What did pulling that lever do?
But at the same time I love Zombie Waffe so much and I don't want you to drop it.
In the end they're your comics, your choice so don't feel like you have to please the people and do something you don't want to do.
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