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Deskerv — Jin and Deskerv Revised
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Published: 2007-08-24 13:18:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 171; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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A new picture of Jin and Deskerv. Hope you guys like itRelated content
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Looks good. Deskerv's sword is awesome. Just keep practicing. You'll get there in no time.
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Thanks. I have re-revised pictures of Jin and Deskerv I'll post them soon so be on the look out
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Sweet. Can't wait to see them.
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Yeah, I agree w/ the hole weapon thing. Use a ruler to make them straight. What you could do is just look up a bunch of sword designs and just start copying them and changin them to suit u till you can do right. Asides from that, ANATOMY ANATOMY ANATOMY! I know its boring (Really it is xD) but you NEED to start studing up a bit more. I suggest getting the How to draw anatomy book. I got it and I'm getting over that hump pretty quickly. I have noticed you've improved. 
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Oh wow.
Your art style is definitely improving.
I would suggest trying to get the line as straight as possible when drawing the swords. It makes it look more realistic.
And the other guy on the right. His legs are a little off.
Other than that you did a great job drawing this.
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Thanks. The one on the left is Deskerv the one on the right is Jin. They're both from my story Phantom Thief Jin. Check it out in my gallery
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their legs look wobbly, the lines for deskerv's sword look as if u traced and traced it badly. there is no seperation between ur character's hair and skin, their shoulders are way to low for their necks, arms are way too long the fingers look pudgy their legs are crooked Jin's sword looks a lot plainer than before, what u need to do is make a character model, take a good look at ur picture and u'll notice when a character's legs are too small and there arms are too long, there is still room for improvement
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didn't have to be so direct about it...
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the direct approach is very easy to understand i didnt mean to be blunt
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Yea. There was a previous LARGER design, but I lost it and had to recreate it
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well then ... great new-design XD
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Thanks. Oh yeah can you draw deskerv in your style please
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hehe XD
but please be patient
cause it might take some time =3
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