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Published: 2004-12-07 17:25:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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The hunter sawThe wolves
Running through the trees
He took aim
And pulled the trigger
He shot the Leader
Through the heart
Quick and painless
Is how he died
The shot echoed
Through the forest
The wolves howling
Their lost
Then the wolves turned
Jumping on the Hunter
From behind
Killing him
Like he killed the Leader
The gun shot
Once more
Hit a tree
And that is the end
Of the Hunter
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Comments: 17
as opposed to conventional? i mean come on really nothing i say or do is defined as normal
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Well, depends on the era in which you define 'normal'.
In one sense, you are somewhat normal, in the general trends/mindset of the generation, but, that only makes you more unconventional, as that's almost in direct opposition to the previous generation.
I mean as in that it was... Pespective poetry? Seems to be from the view of a person/whatever, and telling a more direct story, though still in poetic format. If that makes the slightest bit of sense, I'm relieved.
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well i'm really confused but thats normal so be relieved
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lol
I was bored, so I decided to be a bit more obscure.
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as opposed to sad to hear it.... i confused myself
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ok well at least i'm not alone in that fact
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Most definately.
Though, I'm rather used to being confused now...
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so am i... its a way of life
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Indeed.
Nice floaty feelings.
^_~
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i want to play with the floaty feelings!
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So long as you don't pop them, fine.
Coming down to reality sucks.
^_~
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true... reality sucks in general
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