Comments: 35
DeathAngel2003 [2017-06-20 00:41:02 +0000 UTC]
sorry aboy spelling
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DeathAngel2003 [2017-06-20 00:40:46 +0000 UTC]
i relly love this poem
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wozzmeyer [2015-11-14 13:55:17 +0000 UTC]
If someone said 3 years from now, you'd be long gone
I'd stand up and punch their mouth
Cuz they're all wrong!
The last kiss I'll cherish until we meet again.
And time makes it harder, I wish I could remember.
But I keep your memory, you visit me in my sleep,
my darling, Who Knew?
Just...those feels
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demonrobber In reply to wozzmeyer [2015-11-14 14:14:17 +0000 UTC]
Sweet but sad poem. Perhaps soulmates are re-united in Heaven.
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PeterJJunior [2014-09-16 10:45:43 +0000 UTC]
marvellous and memorable
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Theavengercoat [2014-06-17 22:26:41 +0000 UTC]
Is beautiful, and is like my love story, love it
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demonrobber In reply to Theavengercoat [2014-06-18 08:26:19 +0000 UTC]
It is a love story and I hope it is beautiful. Thank you.
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luna777thirteen [2014-05-20 01:37:14 +0000 UTC]
simply beautiful, my friend.
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ladycrowlee [2014-05-07 19:57:01 +0000 UTC]
omg such a dark love story I love itt!!!!! <3
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GUDRUN355 [2014-05-07 11:10:46 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful, emotive verse.
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Sorrowscoldfrost [2014-05-07 02:06:53 +0000 UTC]
That was really good. Makes me wonder if the dark angel is really there, or the guy is just hallucinating.
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demonrobber In reply to Sorrowscoldfrost [2014-05-07 07:48:29 +0000 UTC]
That is it exactly. He may be mad and hallucinating or she may be a real angel banished from heaven. Thank you.
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vampirekingdom [2014-05-06 20:05:14 +0000 UTC]
Amazing as usual my friend!!!!!!
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deadhope4ever [2014-05-06 19:41:36 +0000 UTC]
beautiful I'd love to belive she really is there
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demonrobber In reply to deadhope4ever [2014-05-07 07:50:08 +0000 UTC]
I hope so too and they can be together until he dies and perhaps they can both return to heaven. Thanks.
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nillejohnson [2014-05-06 17:06:06 +0000 UTC]
beautiful
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redsnow-adopt737 [2014-05-06 16:32:46 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful a tail of how love can even defined death and beyond that , grate job
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demonrobber In reply to redsnow-adopt737 [2014-05-06 16:43:07 +0000 UTC]
I am pleased you understood and appreciate the message of the poem. Thank you.
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