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dejan91lp — Far Far Away In Another Lifee
Published: 2009-11-14 15:32:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 903; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 29
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this is a painting of a space (obviously XD)..this could be mine best painting in my short painting history (one year soon, time really flyes XD)
it's been done with a various things (the moon and his orbit are done with a candy bar paper; the stars are actually little pieces of JAR's that i found and glued to the paper, and then i colored them and around them with watercolors....
i am happy the awate the judge on this piece, so i can compare it to the one that my art teacher gave me...
MLNW...
peace to all!!!!!
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Wow nice colours!
Looks like the planet and it's asteroid halo are made of paper, really nice depth
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well they actually are made of paper-candy wrap paper hehehe
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The only critique/improvement I have is perhaps crank up the color contrast in Photoshop or another program if you can. ^^ It's gorgeous though, the metal planet, the ring. This is splendid work! I love Space and combining it with creativity is just something I could stare at for hours. 
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thank you...for the advice and the cheers....
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Wow that looks so cool. I really like how creative it is. The problem is that this is a digital copy afterall and the quality probably doesn't look like it does in real life. One way to really make it look better is try turning up the contrast in photoshop, that would help digitizing the piece a lot better.
Hope I was able to help!
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THANK YOU...I TOTTALY FORGOT THAT THAS WAS MY OPTION TOO HEHEHEHHE THANKS FOR THE ADVICE
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I love the fact that you used everyday item for this piece. I also like all the colors, but I think some places are too dark. Then again, this is a picture of space, so I guess it's supposed to be dark.
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hehehe...well some places are ment to be dark...thank you for the comment
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The mixed media is a great idea in this! 
I think the ring could be smoother, but I think you've already been told that, and my other piece of advice is to change "Lifee" back to "Life" .. it looks unprofessional.
Good luck in the contest!
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i know, but its kinda mistake of admins on give me feedback this lifee was uploaded for one contest, and i gave the admins the link for the "life",in which i included some questions, but i dont know how did they made a mistake and putted this one in LOL
yea-its couse i dont see space as black, black i just not space XD
yea i have been told that, but its really hard to ,make it smoother because the paper itself is not smoode, and i even had to shape it and glue, and that made it even more not smooth
thanks for the comment
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I like the idea of mixed media on here. I think it would help if the rings around the planet were a little smoother. Did you sketch the idea first, or no? Because that would also help for layout and composition.
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no i haven't skeched, i just started painting and gluing, i never ckech, what i am about to paint, i don't know why, but i don'y like to do that.
yea, i tryed to make the smoother as i can, but its hard with that kind of a paper, especialy becouse, i had to glue it down
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Sometimes a sketch or rough idea can help. We did that for all my oil paintings except the ocean one. But that one had direct reference to a painting. Paper is hard to make smooth sometimes!
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well its kinda hard to make sceches when you dont actualyy know what are you going to paint...
thats me, i just get this urge to piant, and i do the first thing that hits me, and i finish it like in 20 minutes, my brush gets hot how fast i move with her hehehehehhehe
...yea, ecpecialy couse this was candy wrap paper
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Ahhhh.... Interesting. Try it sometime, though, and see what you think!
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That is crazy! Looks like there are some faces peeking out at me; very cool! Maybe if there were less bright colours it would look better, though.
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hehehe..alien bastards hahahhahaha
thanx for the advice
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I think this is very awesome and creative, I like all the colors - it demonstrates the chaos of the universe, in my opinion. ;D
The only thing I don't like is that ring... I think you should extend it out around the left side of the planet a little more, and sharpen the curve a little bit so that it looks more like it's going around the planet.
I hope that helps, and sorry I can't give you more advice than that. ^^b
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thank you i really apreciate on the advice..
and yes that was my intention with colors....and thanx for the fav tooo
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This was a little different space than what I usually see.
What have you painted the picture with?
I think it looks a bit messy out but I know how hard it is to paint with a brush and paint.
So I think it looks quite okay ..
Good
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yes it is a unusual comparing to the "normal" space art...
i have painted with normal water colors (tempera)...
i intentionally made it a little messy because thats how i see space,,,
thanks for the comment
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its so much better than my works with pencil, you dont wanna see it so bad is it.. x)
(:
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well nothing is that bad...
wow u use my smiley X) X)
i love that smiley its like wierd x-files smile hehehehhehehehehe
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haaahaaa, yes its a really great smiley
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I like it, its interesting. The only thing i would point out is that it seems to lack depth. I find it a bit 2D. But is just my opinio, you might want it like that.
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I like that you have used nontraditional items for this. It gives it an interesting texture as well as recycling what would otherwise be thrown out. I think you may have to many things going on in here though, it is very busy. Maybe mute some of the colors, that might help.
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thanx
yes i have been told that its kinda you dont know where to look, that it doesn't have the main part
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