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Published: 2005-01-14 19:01:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 253; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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[EDIT]- I tried to fix everything I could... I Know that at the end of the sword it gets fat but i couldn't fix it sry:sweat:From Rave Master tell me what you think
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oooh so good, i like the sword! i love pointy objects, but only if i could poke people with them. *poke* *poke*
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oh thank you very much ma'am *poke's back*
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ma'am? me? *flattered* ive nevah bin called ma'am before
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i call everybody who i am joking around with ma'am if i think they are a chick or sir if i think that they are a guy..
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Well is a pretty good peice of work really ^_^. Probably one of your best (I went and looked through all of your gallery a while ago). I think your learning pretty well. Mind if I point out a few critiques to help ya along?
The position of the body: His whole pose looks a little stiff. The upper body looks good, though its the lower body that needs to be a little more fluid. Try thinking of curves when you draw action poses.
The Sword: Even from the side, it looks like its still from the front. I wish I could help you further on this though, but I'm not much of a teacher when it comes to draw weapons 
Folds: Lack of folds usually makes an image look 2d (though it doesnt for you cause of the sword and legs). Folds also give you a sense of realism (as far as anime goes) to how the clothes hang and hug a body. Try adding a few lines on the clothes part of your drawing to act as wrinkles and stuff and see how much better it makes it look. Don't go overboard though
All in all. You did a really good on the hair and face. Keep up the good work 
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thank you, you are the only one who has really said some advice that really helps me, except for ~BlackFoxFire that is because she is the one who first taught me. i need some advice on feet, well bare feet really it is hard for me to draw them like that.
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Well I try to help as many people as I can when I see they need some advice and a push in the right direction ^_^. And sure, I'll give ya some advice on feet if ya want ^_^.
Feet are almost as important as hands. The size, and shape, determines the outlook of the picture. Especially so if they're bare (wich makes feet easier, because you can always put a shoe on em). Realisticly, the feet are about as long as the forearm of a person. Though in drawing, if you tried to draw them that way they'd just be to big! So imagine them instead about a head wide. Take your characters head and make them that long, and half the size of the head make them that big. I know it may seem like a lot of measurement, but after a while of practicing proportions like that, it'll come naturally after a while.
As far as techniques on drawing the foot, just go with what makes you more comfortable. Be it oval, box, ect. Though if you really want idea's on techniques. go to [link] for some idea's.
Hope that helps ^_^. If ya need anymore help with anything else. Don't hesitate to ask, or go to [link] . Its a great site with plenty of tutorials up for you to try out and people that will help.
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ok thanks your really are a big help
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I do what I can to help ^_^
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hey do you think i could try and draw one of your characters? i am going to put that advice into play as we speak
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Of course 
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the one of you where you're swinging the sword but of course in a different pose i con't draw that well yet
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