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Deep-Ponderer — Useless Heartache
Published: 2005-07-25 03:51:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Useless Heartache

Tell me i'm useless
Tell me i'm great
I won't be controlling
Or determine your fate.
Give me a love rush
Give me a heartache
But please understand
We all make mistakes.
I won't forget you
I'll always remember
My love won't cave in
And i wont' surrender.
Time'll pass by
Quicker than it seemed
I'll remember your kiss
And smile so serene.
Please dont' worry
We'll make it thru
I know this is hard
But don't let it get to you.
I'll alays love you
Even if you love someone else
I'll never forget
The way that i felt.
I won't forget you
I'll always remember
I'll hold you in my arms
And kiss you tender.
Tell me i'm useless
Give me a heartache
But i'll still love you
This pressure i'll take.
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Comments: 3

MntDewforBlood [2005-09-18 23:42:18 +0000 UTC]

I think it rocks ^.^

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Kit-Kat-J [2005-07-25 03:54:31 +0000 UTC]

Awww, that's such a sweet poem. You did great with the rhyming and put a good effect in the 'story' as well.

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Deep-Ponderer In reply to Kit-Kat-J [2005-07-25 04:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks <3 I'm not really sure if i do good in poetry but thank you for your comment and honesty! Glad you liked it!

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