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Published: 2016-09-25 23:25:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 396; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 2
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I'm p proud of this uwuThe sky is the best part tbh, idk about the ground, I might redo it
Please critique !!!
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I have no idea how to start critiques rip
So I really like the technique, especially that you used w the shading! The colours are obvs really natural, but they're really aesthetically pleasing. And it generally gives off really nice vibes. The brushes you used for the clouds are really nice, too! I have nothing but positive opinions on this piece. Although I have seen some other people paint very similar scenes, but what can you do.
[gotta fill some space up lmao I'm sorry;;;;;;; O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O O]
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I really like the shading. The sky is quite nice as well, and I like that you can't clearly see the sun. The clouds are very nice. But I think the rocks stick out a little too much. The shading is decent on the rocks, but it looks a little like it contrasts too much with the rest of the picture, if that makes sense. I do like the strands of grass, though, and I personally think the only thing that could use some improvement would be the rocks. Otherwise, it's a very well executed picture.
//i hope this was a decent critique ;v;
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I dont really have a critique! The shading is on point, the textures are really nice, and I love how wispy the clouds are. The hills in the back could use a little more refining, but other than that, great job! <3
(i have to fill this up so lmAO)
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Overall, I think that the drawing is actually pretty good but it could be better! This is just a critique from my point of view and this is what I have to say:
First off, like Velovity said, the rocks stand out too much. It might be due to the lack of shadows on the ground of the rocks so it looks really unatural. Unless the light is from directly above, there should be some sort of shadow. Β They look so dark compared to what is around it.
The sun looks great. I especially love the rays and airbrush used around the area. I also agree with Velovity that the strands of grass are amazing.
The clouds look fine, they're actually pretty well drawn and layered as well! The sky looks really dull and plain because it looks like if it's just one single shade. Adding a gradient to the sky with a slightly different hue that is lighter/darker (depending on the time of the day) might help.
This doesn't look like a landscape drawing that is completely finished. It looks like if you finished most of it but can use some major finishing touches. Especially the "hills" (I'm not sure what it is) because they look like a scribble.Β
It isn't really necessary to do in this but it is a suggestion that I have to improve your art in general. When you choose the colors for shading, you should use several hues of the color instead of just one. Black and it's shades are especially not good for shading as most artists would find this out eventually. Those colors make the drawing look flat or dull (according to what some others have said to me before and I agree now). If you're not doing that now, I suggest that you give it a try! If you don't get what I mean, an example would be using a darker shade of blue and a slightly lighter but still dark purple/blue. It could be hard at first but since I started using this method while drawing eyes and they looked amazing :3
I'm sorry about this being long! I felt like talking a bit today xD
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Yeah I rushed the hills bc I had to go to bed and my mom was yelling at me x'DD
I might redo this and fix a lot of the mistakes bc I had like no time ;w;
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That's really pretty! I need to work on my backgrounds XD
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