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Published: 2010-10-03 20:31:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 501; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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Description I'm not scared because my bones rattle
Because my teeth chatter
Because my hair on my arms stands tall like a solider

I'm not scared because my body tells me i am
Because my legs quiver
Because my throat has gone dry like the Autumn leaves

Fear is in my mind
Fear is not in my body
Fearing no feeling of fear is the greatest fear I have
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Comments: 19

13GrapyeverMusic13 [2010-10-05 23:22:36 +0000 UTC]

last line i think i get it but dont hmmmmmmm
but every thing else I get...
AAAAWWWSSSOOOMMMEEE

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DavidWoods In reply to 13GrapyeverMusic13 [2010-10-06 08:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Haha its like my greatest fear is having no feeling of fear... its like a contradiction of itself
and thank you

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13GrapyeverMusic13 In reply to DavidWoods [2010-10-07 11:17:14 +0000 UTC]

that clears it up
and your welcome

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ClockCake [2010-10-05 20:05:41 +0000 UTC]

this stuff is genius
awesome work

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DavidWoods In reply to ClockCake [2010-10-05 20:30:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you mr mc cann

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ClockCake In reply to DavidWoods [2010-10-05 20:44:45 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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DNfangirl96 [2010-10-04 15:24:20 +0000 UTC]

LOL the last line is like a riddle.

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DavidWoods In reply to DNfangirl96 [2010-10-04 15:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Wouldnt say its a riddle to be fair Riddles are more puzzles, this is just a direct statement

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DNfangirl96 In reply to DavidWoods [2010-10-09 07:56:13 +0000 UTC]

Hence i said like a riddle... hehe it took me a bit to get my head around it.

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DavidWoods In reply to DNfangirl96 [2010-10-09 09:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah i do like my pieces of writing to be slightly confusing

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Ellz112 [2010-10-03 21:15:45 +0000 UTC]

Last Sentence. Epic mind rape.

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DavidWoods In reply to Ellz112 [2010-10-03 21:39:35 +0000 UTC]

too confusing is it?

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Ellz112 In reply to DavidWoods [2010-10-03 21:46:35 +0000 UTC]

No no! It makes complete sense! Its so genius, Which is the mind raping part :L

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DavidWoods In reply to Ellz112 [2010-10-03 21:52:43 +0000 UTC]

ahhh i see! awh thank you ellen

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Ellz112 In reply to DavidWoods [2010-10-03 21:53:34 +0000 UTC]

No problem! You are seriously getting better with each one of these ^^

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DavidWoods In reply to Ellz112 [2010-10-03 21:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Once again thank you so much, its comments like these that really mean so much to me

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Ellz112 In reply to DavidWoods [2010-10-03 22:00:54 +0000 UTC]

Well you deserve such comments!

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DavidWoods In reply to Ellz112 [2010-10-04 15:32:19 +0000 UTC]

Awh once again thank you ellen

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Ellz112 In reply to DavidWoods [2010-10-04 19:14:26 +0000 UTC]

^^

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