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Published: 2005-10-31 04:24:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 734; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 79
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another from my shoot with jeremy, at the tracks in hillyard, wa.=daveainley
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Gonna do this as soon as possible. Really like your portraits, anyway *-* and some models XD
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huh? gona do WHAT as soon as possible?? thanks for the compliment.
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thank you. did you look through the whole gallery?
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Another great frame! Using the tracks to frame and draw the eyes toward Jeremy works really well, as does the shallow depth-of-field.
Since your asking for advanced critique, the sign on the left of the frame bothers me. It's a roadblock for your eyes as they travel up the tracks. You've got such a nice clean background with the washed out sky, then there's that sign. That damn sign!
Great shot otherwise (even if I don't like the mandals he's wearing... but that's got nothing to do with your work)!
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you're right about that sign. i need to go back and erase it. thanks, man! hahaha... mandals. good point. i'm not the biggest fan either, but he's a rad kid.
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He looks easy to work with... has that cool laid back hair. it's always the hair that gives it away.
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that's true...
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thank you!
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