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LarsonCross [2011-06-03 05:21:41 +0000 UTC]

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this is really good.

the only things i can see that bug me are the proportions. this reminds me more of a wolf or canine than it does a weasel. weasels have large round ears,where as far as i can tell the ears are smaller and slightly pointed.

also the paws and muzzle. the paws are big and wide. weasels have small hand type paws. and the muzzle is to big and blocky. a weasel has a thin muzzle that comes to a point.

also on the paws, the right paw should probably be a little bit more curved,for some reason it just looks a little off. broken sorda.

and the last thing would be the nose. i think if im going to give proportion critiques above,then i should include the nose. a weasel has a small nose. :3

and thats about it. ^^ other than that,this is a great picture. VERY expressive.

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goldeyes12 [2011-02-13 17:07:13 +0000 UTC]

I really like the colors and the picture concept in general. Great job!

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Phar0s [2011-02-13 02:39:35 +0000 UTC]

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Hope it helps. c:

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Zaluke [2011-02-13 02:08:00 +0000 UTC]

Just simply beautiful!

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DistortedReveries [2011-02-13 01:07:12 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME ;3; -fave-

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Owlflight-Stormskys [2011-02-13 00:54:04 +0000 UTC]

Cons: It'd look better if the shadding was more shaded out so it'd be a little less dimeaning,
and on dogs feet the little toe-pads are larger so they'd be big and touching,
the ear looks a tad off but I'm still not sure because of the odd shading.
And with Cainies, on their legs it curves in a bit, so you wouldn't see it fanning out,
Also, don't smudge it so much, it'd look better
The chain attachted to the foot should be much darker, because it's much lower,

Pro's: The back ground is amazing
the paw is perfect, I love it, the shading is gorgous on it (though it'd be better lighter)
the legs are perfect and good
Everything else is perfect

I hope this was helpful

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Aleru-92 [2011-02-13 00:53:43 +0000 UTC]

well...i cant critique you...but i should have added more brightness to the chain.... and perhaps (she is in the waer roght? ) some more light to de water..from the top side... and more dark from the bottom side...

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EllenTheWolfGirl [2011-02-13 00:44:18 +0000 UTC]

dang! Hun thats a really big improvement! Keep up the good work!

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midnightstorm45044 [2011-02-13 00:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Always fun to do re-draws
I love the character's color, and how the shadows and colors seem to ineract in a way. Also, the pose looks really nicely depicted.

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