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Published: 2008-10-27 04:00:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 610; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 15
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This is just another character that I had a dream of...I just recently named him Seraphy. I made another character, too. I'll put him up later.I tried to take my time with the details, regardless of how unnecesary they are.X3 I kknow that the cloths on his waste look a littke stiff, but I guess they're supposed to be that way then...XD
This was an ugly, sloppy sketch, therefore, I put it in Photoshop to get rid of the dark smudges and to enhance the lines here before I trace over it with my Micron pens.^^
Critique if you like!
(lol I also know that I am not drawing for anyone immidiately...I need to practice or else those requests and/or art trades will turn out like crap!)
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Grr, stop asking for critique.
you're not getting any!
I this.
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lol Thanks so much!
But, I need some more sources for help other than myself, to fix up my pictures!XD
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Oh fine... however I don't see anything in need of fiing up...
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I guess I'll get better over time.X3 I wanna get a graphics tablet to increase my motivation in drawing so I can draw more often and improve quicker.:]
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How can I critique this?
Well maybe you could put some detail in the wing's skin...That's the only thing that's not detailed to extreme besides the shirt. XD
But this IS really nice. Nice details-they bring it out well :>
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Thanks so much for pointing those things out!^^
lol I'll try to keep practicing on his character design and I'll try to add some more detail as I go.X3
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no probs, lol ^_^
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i really looovveee how you drew his wings XD
hows this a sloppy sketch??
its like perfect compaired to mine
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X3 Thank you!
This sketch needs to be touched-up some more and the wings need help (at least the one on his left.X3).
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your welcome XD
i think the wings look great
i see no problem w/ them ^^
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I love your wings. You always draw them so well.
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Thank you!
I still need practice.X3 I don't even have a distinct style of detailed wings yet.-_-"
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Your welcome!
I wouldn't worry about it too much. It comes with time and you're well on your way. ^^
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omg =O
that is amazing, I cannot find anything wrong with it, just wow, wow wow wow, fucking wow!
You are becoming such a gorgeous artist, it is like you are becoming a prodigy =O and I will always support you hun! God, just wow, the wings are amazing, I lover the fleshy detail! NO ONE DOES FLESHY DETAIL ANYMORES >,<~ but now you do 
but wow, definite automatic fav, you are amazing
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Thank you so very, very much!
Yes, I would love your support!
You're right! 'A' It looks like people must not like those kinds of details anymore; maybe they're going out of style?
I'm trying to epiphanize my art style and it seems to be more successful if I were to draw in an empty room, you know, with no-one to bother you at all? That would let me think better.
Thanks a lot again!
Have you been drawing and practicing a bunch lately?X3
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but if you want i will color this for ya
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You may color this if you like!^^ Would you want to color this as the sketch or should I give you the traced lines?X3
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Just email me whichever you would like me to colour =3 that and the colour scheme so I know what to do xD
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I don't have a particular color scheme for him yet,therefore you can color him in any way you like for the time being. The main thing would be to color him with sinister colors, like some violets, blacks, reds, or blues and to keep them a bit light?^^
You can color the sketch if you like. I'll try to find a way to e-mail it to you. If not, I will have to let you download it from here.>.<
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ugh, I wish i have gotten time to practice ;_; Like you said, you can only practice in a place alone, and I have been so busy now that school has tackled me, keeping up with that and holding up those A's and all gets so pressurizing I am too tense to even think of drawing, and even when I am not doing school work I am spending time with my bf or having "me-time" and even those times are seldom, I barely get time to comment, but I try to with my friends on here or I feel too bad, I am already behind 80 deviations in my box >.👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yeah, I know what you mean.-_-"
I think I'm going to get all A's for the first quarter (maybe a B in English though...X3)
I know this may sound harsh, but I usually click off all of the literature and/or all the club submissions and then I chack the other deviations because they're quicker to go through. I will come back to comment depending on the popularity of it (some people won't reply to your comments cuz they're too busy).
You could try bringing a little sketch book or something to jot down your ideas. You could even try sketching your friends!^^
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O=! and you did skirt layering like I did on my noinja lol, i love skirt layering, it makes things so interesting, and I love the designs! -foams at mouth and rolls on floor- your art makes me crazy happy
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Yeah! I should try to do more skirt layering sometime. It really does make things look more interesting!
lol Thanks! I don't do floral, so I had to think of something else that could fit his style, like random lines, swirls, squiggles, and even some zig-zags.X3
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neh that is not a seraphi ,but will murder any thing I've ever drawn O.o
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But, that's his name!
Don't you destroy or throw away any of your pictures. If you continue practicing you would want to see your progress, you know?
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and it is fun, my favorite skirt layering is the frilly junk ^-^ it is so magical!
but no problem, yeah the zig zags fit him, makes him more edgy and evil looking, but you are getting so much better, I am proud of you ^-^ I hope to get that way when I have time >.👍: 0 ⏩: 1