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Published: 2003-09-07 08:03:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 114; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 14
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Description This pain was not meant to hurt so much,
Why didn't I build the walls higher?
These tears reveal the battle's lost.
Nothing but shame can face me now.

All the punishments I withstood,
The dreams I banished from my mind.
I built a fortress without knowledge..
The weakness that plagues mankind.

And yet the castle continues to fall
Like diamonds as the heavens cry.
The demons I locked behind stone walls
Have escaped and hunt me to my death.

This pain was not meant to hurt so much
I thought the walls could keep me safe
Now they crumble, my hard work..
The tears still tremble on my face.
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Comments: 4

airmonkeys [2003-10-08 01:53:50 +0000 UTC]

oh man iz soo sad!! well hey da poems good... so sad...aiee...

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kara [2003-09-08 17:21:22 +0000 UTC]

hmm, reminds me of a song by The Firm...

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dark-fire In reply to kara [2003-09-09 09:20:23 +0000 UTC]

really? never heard of them.. but they must b good if they're lyrics are similar

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darknessupon [2003-09-07 08:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful ryhthem, I like this alot!

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