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Published: 2004-12-25 02:16:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 178; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description From the mists of time and the other surrounds,
We arose in the beginning.
And within different shells we lived and died
Intertwined we shared our separate lives.
Until now.

Meandering through this brief existence
I search in vain for all of me
For now I am lost and strain to find
You who have always shared my mind,
Until now.
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Comments: 17

airmonkeys [2004-12-27 13:02:54 +0000 UTC]

omg is that soppy udani ACTUALLY showing herself??? lol ...
tis a great poem
this brought along by ahem D? r u for serial? i thort i was the soulmate dognamit!!! hehehe jk jk

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dark-fire In reply to airmonkeys [2004-12-28 22:19:01 +0000 UTC]

lol.. no no no.. for all of that. i dun believe in that soulmate stuff. .. but if i did sam u would definitely be it

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airmonkeys In reply to dark-fire [2004-12-29 07:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Lol!! hehe well glad to hear that! yay my life is fulfilled

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dark-fire In reply to airmonkeys [2005-01-02 21:25:28 +0000 UTC]

awww..yeh i knew it would be.

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airmonkeys In reply to dark-fire [2005-01-04 09:59:05 +0000 UTC]

lol u monkey !!! this slice is on ur face! *hey that rhymes* ...actually i just had a sudden urge to squish a whole lemon pie on some1s face hhmmm

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AccosT In reply to airmonkeys [2005-01-13 04:11:32 +0000 UTC]

Mm pie...I'M SO HUNGRY!

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airmonkeys In reply to AccosT [2005-01-14 06:44:24 +0000 UTC]

awww do u want pie tooo?? herrre have sum but i had to have a slice first

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AccosT [2004-12-26 04:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Random rhyming pattern eh? The whole thing sounds furry, and it needs someone to kill something in it.

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dark-fire In reply to AccosT [2004-12-27 10:02:52 +0000 UTC]

furry eh. feel free to kill something in it. it is a bit soppy for my liking.. i mean soulmates??!! *rolls eyes* pfftt

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AccosT In reply to dark-fire [2005-01-13 04:12:54 +0000 UTC]

...Are you giving me permission to rewrite your poem to make room for something slightly more homicidal and less furry?

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dark-fire In reply to AccosT [2005-01-14 01:23:57 +0000 UTC]

nope

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AccosT In reply to dark-fire [2005-01-15 00:28:04 +0000 UTC]

dang.

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vulpixseel [2004-12-25 12:32:15 +0000 UTC]

HUGS.. Hi thereeeeeeeeee..
Heheh yes I agree with the 'still hopish' poetry write more eheh
MERRY XMASS!!

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ruella [2004-12-25 10:14:51 +0000 UTC]

whoa...you - hope?! okay, WHAT have you done w/the REAL udani???? lol. yeah, it's nice to believe, but i don't know if i believe it. i wonder if this has been sparked by anyone in particular ? nah-uhh!! LOL. merry christmas sis

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dark-fire In reply to ruella [2004-12-27 09:53:23 +0000 UTC]

lol.. screw u. *crosses arms and pokes out tongue* i hate you now. hrmph.

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Dimager [2004-12-25 08:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Gladto read Your poetry again Udi - We have "twins" by our looks wandering somewhere sometimes close, mostly far away even in other cultures. Yesterday i got a call from Sweden where a friend of mine had met someone looking exactly as he was me and that guy was from North Africa?! We also have soulmates, completely different, but who are connected of some reason we can't even describe, we just feel it's alright to explore further to share thoughts and meet for the feeling...

This is beautiful piece - so peaceful as well, thank You for sharing


Happy Holidays

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heroinbuddha [2004-12-25 07:19:12 +0000 UTC]

man u need to listen to some soppy love music, like tale as old as time- beauty and the beast. A song that Ill have you know... Im listening to right now!

Merry christmas dude, I hope you and your soulmate are having a riot!

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