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dark-fire — Desire- vampire thoughts
Published: 2006-09-21 13:45:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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I see you with your flesh so tender,Sparkling conversation,
Bound by shackles that are human
I am immortal but I cant break them.
Tell me that you do not want me;
The darkest thoughts that grace your mind,
I’ll tell you that I do not need you
But it’s want that keeps me kind.
Forbidden as it is to feel
For our prey a different hunger-
Yet I lust for y o u, your mind,
Not for your blood or flesh so tender..
Would you have me reveal it all
Break the silence in your smile
Your heart is locked out of my grasp
My own’s been dead for quite a while.
I listen to the words you say
Want your thoughts and want your dreams
Pathetic that immortality
Has no control of wants and needs.
Come closer for I wont go there,
You’re not mine, so I’ll sit and wait
Forbidden as my thoughts may be,
My kind has always tempted fate.
Comments: 4
Story? Where is this story?!
Also, why has everyone covered up their 'last visted' thing? Now I don't know when people are on, or when they were last on, or nothin'
I agree with with Sarrmila, like your style. A very lyrical style. Perfect for being in a band really... *hint*
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hell i'd love to be in a band.. that was currently operating *hint hint* sorry.. i'll put my last visited thing back on. it's pretty shameful is all.. which is why i obliterated it.. but thanx.. i guess lyrical is good? *sigh*
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heyyy nice poem dude~ u know why i like ur poem...or ur style of writing well...cuz its something that isnt real...but when i read your poem it feels so natural. But i suppose the underlying thoughts are human enough...cept for the eating part 
anyways i have to ask... are you an aspiring vampire? Should I be standing at least 10 m away from you....and oh yeah cover my blood when i get injured 
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lol thanx man.. 
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