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Danyasaur — Lost In Piney Woods
Published: 2013-10-27 17:50:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 179; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description Wrought in this cocoon of leaf and sprig,
I was born and lost in the piney woods.
The wolves were heard more than I was,
Adrift in that isolating sea
Of dirt and trees,
Where creatures line their homes
With lonely sighs.
There I lived,
And there I died,
Surrounded by a euphony
Of birds who swam the wooden sea;
Who stretched their feathered oars
And sallied forth
To worlds unknown to me.
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Comments: 7

irrationalrationale [2015-07-03 00:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh this is so beautiful! I love it! My favorite favorite part is the 4 lines at the bottom! Love it!

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Ascending-Storm [2013-11-09 19:05:58 +0000 UTC]

As always, beautifully written Danya. I get a lot of inspiration from this

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Danyasaur In reply to Ascending-Storm [2013-11-10 22:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much, Jeff! I appreciate it.

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Crafedo-Esquire [2013-11-03 03:09:54 +0000 UTC]

Firstly, major props for using the word Euphony. That's a damn fine word Secondly, I just love this poem. The isolation is deafening and the way you paired water with wood is really surprising. It brings the isolation of the sea into the seemingly enclosed space of a forest which ramps up the emotion a bunch for me.

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Danyasaur In reply to Crafedo-Esquire [2013-11-04 23:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Haha! Thanks, man. It is quite a lovely word. I always really enjoy hearing your feedback. Glad you liked it.

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FaintSketches [2013-10-27 21:14:28 +0000 UTC]

This made me tear up, Danya... Absolutely beautiful.....

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Danyasaur In reply to FaintSketches [2013-10-27 23:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, Taylor. I really appreciate you reading it.

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