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dance-the-misery — The Painful Dance
Published: 2003-05-08 17:33:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 962; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 118
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As the others watch horrifiedWe let the blood drain
We wear our scars with searing pride
We show no shame in pain
They cannot fathom the inside
They\'ve never felt the burn
To every rule they will abide
but we choose to take wrong turns
We\'ll let our weary hearts rest
upon our sleeves to take
We\'ll chance our all on every test
let them slip off and break
Bumping into everything in our way
In this painful dance
I\'ll never wish it a different way
If I take every way, every chance
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Comments: 18
wow your my friend, you give me so many ideas, you are so inspiring
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Love your use of rhyme and rhythm, though at times it does seem a little forced. Your expression though, and use of imagery is wonderful, and the choice of language nice and effective. Well done!
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Now this is a great piece of writing, I gethurt all the time as well. The great expression in this piece is devastating. The picture also sets the tone for the poem nicely. Good job! +fav
I'll give it five out of a possible five decapitations.
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I get hurt all the time, but at least I risk it.
...those words just saved my life. thank you...god thank you.
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Very painful. You expressed it well and the flow is amazing. Great job
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wow, the pics good, but the poem makes the whole thing, great job
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Good stuff.... keep it up... nice topic as well... taking chances... i don't take enought these days.... sigh...
~Slide
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damn that is fucken good. im so tired i cant think of anything intelligent to write tho...
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I think I love you, errr...forget I said that..
This was amazing.
"We wear our scars with searing pride" - so true. Great line.
"but we choose to take wrong turns" - God...YES, and, I never really thought about that too much...Making me think here,
I really liked this, very very nice.
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nothing to thrilling to add-------but I certainly did enjoy the words
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wonderful, this poem is really beautiful. well done
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holy cow, dude. this is insane. the stock photo fits the poem really well. +fav
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"They cannot fathom the inside
They've never felt the burn"
As for the poem, it's just great!
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Nice trail of blood
I absolutely love the pose and the expression you have...
Magnificent!
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I really hate it when i like something -so- much that all i can come up with to say in a comment is "wow" x_x;;. But yeah....WOW
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i know how you feel. Beautiful poem, and the pictue goes good with it. hope you don't mind me adding it to my favourites.
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i totally feel this poem, and the pic is great too, did you use make up or did you add the blood digitaly?
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