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Published: 2017-12-03 02:19:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 3442; Favourites: 266; Downloads: 0
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Navaruh's Pegasus travel from the oasis on the mountain ranges where they live to the canyons on the south in order to give birth and raise their offprings. The nice temperature and the lack of predators makes the canyons the most appropiate place to raise pegasus foals.
They don't live in herds as most of equine breeds on Navaruh, instead they have a monogamous partner and some of them stay together during all their life and others only meet for the breeding season. Both mare and stallion participate on the raising of the foal, and when the foal is strong enough to fly by his own, the family group travels back to the mountain ranges where the food is more abundant.
The journey back to the mountains is very hard for the new flyers and many perish. The ones who survive spend a few years on small social groups until they meet a partner and leave to the canyons for the breeding season.

I finally finished this! Took me forever, and I tried to reduce the use of digital generted textures and try to paint by hand most of the picture. This guy is my Navaruh's Pegasus character named Golden Swallow (not his real name, but everybody knows him for this) who travels around Navaruh telling stories about the bravest mares and stallions that he met on his journey. He is Darion's closest friend. In this picture he was a foal, but his adventurous spirit is already on him.
and this Navaruh thing is a big concept that I'm still developing I opened critics because I spent a lot of time on this picture, and I'd like to know what I did wrong(it looks kinda flat, doesn't io?) in order to avoid doing the same when I spend this huge amount of time again on an illustration.

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Comments: 28

Newtered [2017-12-03 04:23:08 +0000 UTC]

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Hey Georgina!
I gotta say, this piece looks awesome! I really love the scenery and the colors that you used. The Pegasus really sticks out with its warm hues, and I absolutely love the crow and the detail you put on its wings. There's not much to really critique here, besides with the impact of the piece. To me, it seems kind of flat. Mainly due to the crow and Pegasus not having a clear size difference with the perspective. Also, with the intense blue in the background and middle ground pushing the piece back, try adding some warmer tints of black in the crow and in the shadows to let your subjects pop out. This blue really does make the background effective in adding depth to this piece though, so it's not all that bad. Perhaps in other pieces, you could work on pushing and playing with the foreground more. For example, break the space between the outcropping rocks that the crow and the Pegasus are associated with. Some more shrubs might help with that, along with the mentioned color stuff. And yeah!
Hope this helps! ^u^

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Dalgeor In reply to Newtered [2017-12-03 23:22:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for this review I agree with you. It feels like there is nothing going on here, thank you very much for your suggestions about this topic! This was very helpful

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Zoba22 [2018-03-07 15:10:13 +0000 UTC]

 BUENO!!!!! BASTA!!! Me senté como tres o cuatro veces en varias semanas para comentar y nunca lo hago (perdón si no menciono las partes artísticas, Geor, pero me siento super cómoda hablando de la historia que aquí nos estás contando )

Bueno Golden Swallow, desde ya amo su seudónimo, parece un personaje de esos populares entre la sociedad de los equinos, y ese lugar Navaruh, sería como una ciudad?

Este pequeño, que ya no debe ser pequeño XD obtuvo gran parte de mi corazón, y es que le metes tanto entusiasmo a tus historias que uno se queda pegado a la pantalla queriendo saber más. Me encantó que lo encadenaste con la historia de Darion y Nevisca, un chico nuevo que se suma, que más se puede pedir??? ;v; UN COMIC!!!! *Geor bloquea a Zoba de por vida* XDDDD

Como amo ese color que ya le da su nombre, dorado, y con esas alas tan preciosas cubiertas de nieve ya quiero ver más sobre él. QUIERO LA REF GEOR XD

Precioso y tierno trabajo, de verdad me encanta como dibujas a los potros, así más de peques, les da ese aspecto tan inocente que te dan ganas de abrazarlo <3

Más de este chico, plis, que ya lo amo, y voy a entrar en debate sobre mi personajes favorito de estos tres, ya tenemos a la yegua con poderes ocultas, al bicornio... y ahora al PEGASOOOOOOO, te juro que pensé que no los querías demasiado, menos hacer un personaje con ellos. De verdad una pintura épica con ese fondo tan impresionante, que no sólo apreciamos por el fantástico arte, sino por lo que también cuenta.  

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Dalgeor In reply to Zoba22 [2018-03-13 19:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Jajajaja zobiita pasa que te esmeras mucho para comentar y te auto presionas mucho posta no hace falta, total siempre me comentas mis dibujos y personajes cuando chateamos y se que los ves y charlamos de eso de una forma 'mas informal'. Ojo, obviamente super valoro que te tomes la molestia de comentar!! PEro no quiero que se te haga un peso digamos. 
Navaruh sería mas como un continente donde los humanos todavia no llegaron (un setting medieval fantasioso ponele, solo pueden llegar por barco) entonces como que la 'magia' se mantiene intacta. Y  la ref está en proceso jajaja lo prometo!! Es verdad, no me copan mucho los pegasos porque están como muy quemados y son como muy mainstream, pero justamente por eso encaja con el personaje que tenia en mente jaja además la idea era que sea fachero y pueda viajar mas rapido que los demas, no tenia muchas opciones

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Zoba22 In reply to Dalgeor [2018-04-03 18:14:11 +0000 UTC]

Jajaja no te preocupes geor. No es que me presione a comentar. Es diferente. Quería comentar pero tuvo que esperar a que se me vaya el bloqueo. A veces me quedo con los dedos sobre el teclado ... onda tic tac... y me re frustro... porque yo QUIERO hablar de esto xD. A algunos no te niego que le dejo el fave y voy a otro. Porque me encantan tus personajes y tienen prioridad ♡ para mí al menos jajaja. Otros buscarán la parte técnica. Yo busco esto. Tus historias. Tus oc's asi que en serio no te sientas que lo hago por compromiso.

Jajaja sabes pense que no había humanos en este mundo que creaste O.O

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Dalgeor In reply to Zoba22 [2018-04-09 15:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Ahyyy sos mas linda zobita!! 

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FruVider [2018-02-15 14:22:04 +0000 UTC]

Flooooff! Omg that is so cute
Its a really good drawing and the BEST THING is that you made the smal foalwings covered in baby bird floof-feathers (sorry forgot the english word)

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Dalgeor In reply to FruVider [2018-02-25 23:46:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Yes, I always thought those baby featehrs are super cute on baby birds so this baby pegasus must have them haha

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coolwolfdog [2018-01-31 00:42:45 +0000 UTC]

👌🏻

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AonikaArt [2018-01-16 19:45:55 +0000 UTC]

I started to look at your arts only on instagram and I completely stopped to comment, but this one really deserves few words, it is amazing <3 I especially love how fluffy everything is and how you played with light and shadows. Your arts are an eye-candy, keep up the great work!

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Dalgeor In reply to AonikaArt [2018-01-28 23:48:10 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you very much Monika I've been a horrible commenter lately too haha but of course I keep admiring your work as always! It makes me super happy to know it ♥

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Paardjee [2017-12-06 11:58:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow the painting in this piece looks amazing! drawing the textures by hand must be so much work but it really paid off! 
I love the colour contrast, it really helps adding depth to the background. In the foreground I think it would have helped to have the raven more in the light. He kind of fades into the background now.
But other than that it looks beautiful <3

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Dalgeor In reply to Paardjee [2017-12-09 15:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! You're right about the raven's similar value to the background, it makes him a little lost on the sky. Thank you very much for the suggestion ♥ 

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Nimiszu [2017-12-04 04:32:34 +0000 UTC]

You handled the lighting beautifully in this new piece! I love how you made the choice to cast the most light onto Golden Swallow, along with using the bright blues in his cast shadows. Good on you to limit your texture use as well! You carved out the scene and drew the textures gorgeously~ I can't take my eyes off those fluffy wings as well!

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Dalgeor In reply to Nimiszu [2017-12-05 11:52:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you verymuch Nim I'm happythat the textures turned out to be ok! Except that little hidden bush on the left corner haha I still need to practice vegetation without premade brushes! I admite how artist create amazing forests and grass with just a square brush and by making a good use of shapes and lighthing

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Nimiszu In reply to Dalgeor [2017-12-07 04:15:18 +0000 UTC]

Aha you've already done wonders with the basic brush, definitely doesn't hurt to use another brush or two for texture x) That's great that you've been practicing so well! I'm seeing results

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albedoequals1 [2017-12-03 15:36:06 +0000 UTC]

I don't have any comments that would make a proper review, but I love the baby down wings.  They look so soft and fuzzy.

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Dalgeor In reply to albedoequals1 [2017-12-03 23:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! I used as a reference for his baby wings some photos of the rescued barn owls that I reintroduced this year I loved how cute their wings were developing and though that I must replic it in a painting some day

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TheChotta [2017-12-03 05:02:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow this is so awesome!!!! I love how you did the mane!! And the lighting is AWESOME <3 the background is also sooooo breathtaking  

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Dalgeor In reply to TheChotta [2017-12-03 23:23:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! The background took like 3/4 of the time I spent on this, it was reaally hard to figure out how to make those canyons look like canyons haha

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TheChotta In reply to Dalgeor [2017-12-04 06:34:57 +0000 UTC]

You're always welcome! WOW backgrounds are such a pain ahaha you handled it superbly but canyons are so hard I'm so impressed ;w;

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GlasGalahad [2017-12-03 04:23:19 +0000 UTC]

The detail is remarkable! Beautiful work!

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Dalgeor In reply to GlasGalahad [2017-12-03 23:22:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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DrakeTheAngel [2017-12-03 03:16:06 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful!

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Dalgeor In reply to DrakeTheAngel [2017-12-03 23:22:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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DrakeTheAngel In reply to Dalgeor [2017-12-04 00:05:08 +0000 UTC]

You’re welcome!

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cowboifunk [2017-12-03 02:36:47 +0000 UTC]

Lovely color scheme and the fuzzy wings are a nice touch!

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Dalgeor In reply to cowboifunk [2017-12-03 02:39:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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