Comments: 36
Jade-Pandora [2015-12-04 09:31:50 +0000 UTC]
Your wonderful photo has been featured as a preview piece for my new poem "Lost". The mood of the photo I feel is perfect, and I hope you approve. Thank you!
Lost
It's all you've got,
even as it starts to rain
with finger lights, cause
life is a lonely night of cigarettes,
while in pain, one by one, slowly
the songs are sung.
Harmonizing
with a lost chord in between
the rain that falls, cause
life is a lonely night of cigarettes,
drumming in your head; the thunder
that never comes.
Wearing one shoe
don't know where your socks have gone
in a motel room—
life is a lonely night of cigarettes,
running out of matches, and damp
rising from the floor.
Sleep arrives when
you're sitting, staring into
nothingness of blue—
life is a lonely night of cigarettes,
sensory deprived. and living
short of dying.
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Virusir [2014-04-22 22:11:57 +0000 UTC]
Quite a spot on observation from being truly alone.
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PoetryOD [2013-07-01 06:31:37 +0000 UTC]
I just wanted to let you know
that I featured your work here . ♥
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augenweide [2013-02-07 17:52:37 +0000 UTC]
your beautiful work is featured in my new journal...[link]
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ChristineKalliri [2012-05-15 22:37:43 +0000 UTC]
But I feel I'm growing older
And the songs that I have sung
Echo in the distance
Like the sound
Of a windmill goin' 'round
I guess I'll always be
A soldier of fortune
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DakrErebus In reply to ChristineKalliri [2012-05-16 14:25:47 +0000 UTC]
wow ... so beautiful. thanks that you share it with us ^^
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Siannia [2012-01-10 22:03:51 +0000 UTC]
wonderful composition, I love the mood
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DakrErebus In reply to Siannia [2012-01-29 21:01:59 +0000 UTC]
thank you i m glad that you like it ^^
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DakrErebus In reply to daxusx [2012-01-01 03:19:51 +0000 UTC]
i m glad that you like it ^^
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daxusx In reply to DakrErebus [2012-01-02 13:16:11 +0000 UTC]
yes very good play with the light.
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watchmanspain [2011-11-06 00:44:33 +0000 UTC]
This one is a superb pic. It depitcs the sensation of isolation. Perfect.
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Estipi [2011-11-02 18:38:03 +0000 UTC]
Every F*cking moment i fell like that !!! ;(;(;(
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Karhu56 [2011-09-02 06:55:37 +0000 UTC]
Very nice.
... and there is truth in your words. But I often do not get the answers...then the loneliness is nothing more but what it is...
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Karhu56 In reply to DakrErebus [2011-09-03 13:48:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I can certainly identify with it.
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themadd0x [2011-08-17 14:13:23 +0000 UTC]
stunning!
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