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D3lirious โ Powerboat team Brochure
Published: 2007-04-10 01:41:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2211; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Front page of a promotional brochure and logo made for powerboat team LSRacing.Related content
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The photo tells the story of the "product" well. It seems the placement is too central though. The photo might be more interesting if it were lower in the composition. I like the blue bar which fades to white, it gives the feeling of movement which is perfect for this concept. The gradient gray bar coming in from the left helps this as well. I think the dark blue bar above the photo is too dark, maybe a lighter blue bar that acts like the gray bar below would help. The Kausi 2007 looks great, nice work with the reflection, thats been popular lately. Is this the actual LS Racing logo or something you put together for them? It's seems really white and understated. Maybe a different type face with a greater stroke width would help depending on the taste of the client. The two horizontal lines in the logo seem awkward, I don't have a solution for it at the moment. I really like the checkered flag in the top right, the color behind it feels like water. The checkered flag on the bottom breaks up the space well, the proportion is good, but it is missing that dynamic flutter as in the top one. It seems too static for the energy you are trying to convey in this peice.
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You are welcome. I am looking forward to more. I am trying to critique at least one peice a week, I noticed on this site that constructive crits don't appear that often. I'd like to get a group together to do this because I think it will help everyone out and produce even better art, Take good care.
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You are absolutely right and doing a good thing. Iยดll try getting a habit out of giving some critique more often... Anyways, good work
Take care
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