HOME | DD

crystalthorn — Just Another Day
Published: 2006-06-16 20:53:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 299; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 5
Redirect to original
Description Time ticks on eternal,
Just another day,
Just another obstacle,
To trip over,
Another trial,
A guilty verdict,
A stile to climb over,
Another word out of place,
It’s only one day,
But it seems to last forever,
And everything I do is wrong.

I smile,
But no one else is smiling,
I cry,
And I am the only one,
Opening my mouth,
Is like releasing,
A swarm of razor blades,
Sharp and shiny,
Cutting into people,
Because of what I say,
My tact for words,
And if I stapled my mouth closed,
They’d just come from my eyes,
Run with my tears,
Cut open my cheeks,
Expose me for what I am,
And the blood runs warm,
But soon will stop,
And the red tears congeal,
But pain never goes stale,
Never dulls,
Like old knives,
Always sharp,
Like the blade of my knife,
Cutting deeper and deeper,
Into my happiness,
So it’s just another day right?
A whole new day in this rut of repetition.
Related content
Comments: 17

TorturedRemembrance [2008-05-27 19:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Excellent for sure.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

crystalthorn In reply to TorturedRemembrance [2008-06-03 14:50:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I love ur avvy btw, and a very lovely username.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

TorturedRemembrance In reply to crystalthorn [2008-06-04 18:56:51 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome. Why thank you very much. I appreciate that!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Eaglewolf [2006-06-21 13:01:37 +0000 UTC]

WOW

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

crystalthorn In reply to Eaglewolf [2006-06-23 16:56:43 +0000 UTC]

hehe, thanks, lots of wows!!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

fluff-faerie [2006-06-19 12:49:56 +0000 UTC]

another masterpiece, you've totally improved with this whole poetry thing. I can really feel this one loads, as if it was coming from my own heart, and it's so true as well. U managed to put it down in great choice of words and stuff. Love u, talk anytime xx

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

crystalthorn In reply to fluff-faerie [2006-06-19 14:08:19 +0000 UTC]

wow, masterpiece??? thankies!! really?? id hoped i was improving, sometimes i really like a piece and somtimes im not sure. i know what u mean, some of ur stuff makes me feel like that too, tho i wish u didnt relate to this one!! seein as its not all roses and shit. thankies again, u write great detailed comments, thankes. love u toooooo xxxxxxxxxxxx

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

fluff-faerie In reply to crystalthorn [2006-06-20 08:26:32 +0000 UTC]

yeah i meant what i sed. I wish i didn't relate to it either, and i wish u didn't, but oh well. Ur welcome for the detailed comments, love yas xx

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

crystalthorn In reply to fluff-faerie [2006-06-23 17:01:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks. i know, so sucky, but i gues theres nothin we can do. xx

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

catqueen [2006-06-17 16:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Great poem sofa you are excellant at wrieing poems-bravo

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

crystalthorn In reply to catqueen [2006-06-18 20:59:20 +0000 UTC]

thankies honny

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

catqueen In reply to crystalthorn [2006-06-19 12:41:29 +0000 UTC]

no problemo

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

turtle-love [2006-06-17 10:12:14 +0000 UTC]

veyr good..i little wierd at times but good

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

crystalthorn In reply to turtle-love [2006-06-18 20:56:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks but y is it weird

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

turtle-love In reply to crystalthorn [2006-06-19 16:14:41 +0000 UTC]

dw

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

starlit-sky [2006-06-16 23:44:45 +0000 UTC]

hmmm...cruel in some parts but i think that it does match with the rest,so...
i love it!!!
you are getting better and better each time
like u r maturing through your poetry...
but,are you okay?

👍: 0 ⏩: 1

crystalthorn In reply to starlit-sky [2006-06-18 20:55:39 +0000 UTC]

cruel?? y cruel? thankies, very appreciative!!! some days are better than others i ges!!!

👍: 0 ⏩: 0