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CrumbledWings β Your Poetry Sucks
Published: 2013-06-10 15:16:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 13204; Favourites: 919; Downloads: 26
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Yes, roses are redAnd violets are blue
But you have to understand
Who said they had to,
Its about imagination
Emotion and orignality
Not the reiteration
Of dead men's practicality
These words,
They are your sentence
To a world that has to listen
As you create the difference
Whether it be
With angst poem against love
Or how you set your heart free
To fly like a dove,
For these words
Whether or not they be true
Their beauty and ideals
Will be used to define you,
So yes,
Hope ,in fact, has feathers
And like a caged bird it sings
But these words will only be tethers
That strip you of your wings,
Those are their words
Meant for their time
And meant for their herds,
But this your time
Meant for your words
And whether they Β be meaningful, stupid
Or completely absurd
I'm sure they'll be amazing.
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wait that's me
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Irony in the title and the strong message in your poem made me fave this.Β
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Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
It may be a cliche
We all know that much is true
But it's a good starter for those who
Don't want to come up with something new.
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I enjoyed it. and remember, there is nothing new under the sun.
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This really touched me somehow. It is an amazing poem
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This... is beautiful.I really love this. I'll never stop writing!Β Β Β
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Tht was really great! It made me think of this
Roses r red
Violets r blue
Sugar is sweet,
And so r u
But the roses r wilting,
The violets r dead,
The sugar bowl is empty,
And so is ur head!π
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Hope actually has Feathers, I agree.
Yes it can fly if we set it free,
Falling in love with this poem was meant to be! ^^
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absolutely beautiful this made me cry. absolutely inspiring, bravo!
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Brilliant. c:
And I'm the 1001st favouriter.
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I commend you sir 
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Why thank you. c;
And yes, I did.
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Well my poetry does suck. Yours on the other hand, does not.Β
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O.O
Annie is my real name
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Lovely poem, and the title reminds me of Emilie Autumn :3
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People do need a kick in the pants every now and then to get back on track.
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Nice- I still like the Emily Dickinson poem you referenced, regardless of the age! However, poetry is a very fluid and evolving art, as the poem demonstrates.
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Oh, very nice, this. I like this valuable lesson--there comes a time when copying and mimicry will get old and tiresome, and no one's going to be impressed with the same-old same-old. Fanfiction's fine for the off-time--time to write something no one knows about already.
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I say that, to a varying extent, everyone's poetry sucks, including my own on far more occasions than I'd like to admit.
Yet, to steal a line from Kipling:
Just like the dog returns to its vomit,
And the sow returns to her mire...
So does every poetaster just keep on feeling the urge to try and try and try and hope that someday, somehow, something will stick.
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I like this........................this is very true.......ITS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Very nice and judging by the haters in the comments thought provoking.
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Beautiful concept, well-worded. Only thing I would work on is the punctuation.
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This is a great poem I love the honesty. I've not read the other versions you talk about but this is brilliant.
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I like this poem and what you've said in it about writing and poetry.
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It's alright. Not bad. A few mistakes here and there.
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Absolutely wonderful.... I wish I was good at poetry...
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well it already has 700 favs so i would think that'd be overkill but i love the sentiment
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Verse in simple words abounds.
Verse unrhymed abandons sounds.
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