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sinnamun [2014-04-13 17:24:23 +0000 UTC]
uvijek me fasciniralo kako radiΕ‘ simetralna oruΕΎja <':
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CrossArt614 In reply to sinnamun [2014-04-13 17:25:18 +0000 UTC]
tehnika photoshopa sinko XD
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Nurul13 [2014-04-05 04:04:48 +0000 UTC]
I like the color scheme, since I got info that you want some ice magic...
For better result, it will be better if you add some turqouise for more icy effects on the pattern. Maybe adding shoe pattern will be better...
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Nurul13 In reply to CrossArt614 [2014-04-15 02:18:48 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I know you will get my advice on coloring...
I can feel the cold effects, good job!
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CrossArt614 In reply to Nurul13 [2014-04-15 08:27:05 +0000 UTC]
Now i need a good personality for her, that it isn't too trashy. Since a lot of bad things will happen to her during her stay at Jin
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Nurul13 In reply to CrossArt614 [2014-04-16 00:42:35 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you can use her background story for her personality. Seroiusly, I ever made a historical OC, but it seems fail.Β I want to commisioned it, but I don't have enough money for that...
I have to tell you an info : Wen Yang's real name was Wen Shu. But in "Bok of Jin", the name changed to "Yang", his childhood name to bring up in the adulthood.Β
Maybe, if you create her as Wen Yang's twin sister, you can use her old name as the real name. For her, I think she will be the opposite personality of Wen Yang. Because Wen Yang was a focused mind person,which makes him unaware his surroundings, Β you can make Wen Yin as a person who cares about everyone around her, but sometimes level-headed because of her fear from her own past. Her cold personality can also give a hint for the comicbook.
Sorry for taking it too much. You can use my reference, or maybe find another reference. But the concept is still up to you. I'm just giving advice on design
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Nurul13 In reply to CrossArt614 [2014-04-19 02:43:46 +0000 UTC]
Fire and ice, huh?
And... there's something happened next? Like, maybe Yin befriend Lu Xun or Zhu Ran, then they compete for her because of her talent?
I think that might be some drama inside...
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CrossArt614 In reply to Nurul13 [2014-04-19 09:37:23 +0000 UTC]
yea something like that. Zhu Ran will find really strange at first since she will be a little distant and "cold". When it comes to them two competeing oiver, she will always interrupt and say that they need to cool off XD If you have watched Teen Titans show then the relationship between Zhu Ran and Wen Yin will be much like Beast Boy and Raven.
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Nurul13 In reply to CrossArt614 [2014-04-19 13:12:43 +0000 UTC]
I know, I know. BB and Raven, funny, but also cool...
You can use the affair between Zhu Ran and Lu Xun for your hint. It will work well. You want her to have some affair with Zhu Ran, aren't you?
Well, that will be the drama. Then, how to make Wen Yang regain his memory? Is there some clue or something?
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CrossArt614 In reply to Nurul13 [2014-04-19 15:37:42 +0000 UTC]
Wen Yang will recognize her when the people will turn against her. You see he saw that his father lashed out at her and that she left. But back he was wondering who was she and didnt even bother of trying to stop her. Over time he would have dreams of him and Yin playing together. He basicaly tries to remember her, but he remembers her at her exile, trying to call off the archer attack. (Yin receives an arrow in her arm)
As for the drama, Lu Xun doesnt seem like a person to lose his composure over a brickering for a girl. While Zhu Ran is most likely to deny his feelings at first. But it doesnt seem like a bad idea.
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CrossArt614 In reply to Nurul13 [2014-04-24 12:43:28 +0000 UTC]
i am currently working on the splash art, the ill continue the comicΒ prntscr.com/3cnl1s this is still a wip
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