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Crimple — Hearts and diamonds
Published: 2006-07-01 13:52:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1345; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 434
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Been staring at this piece for so long I can no longer see the mistakes @___@ So depending on you to point them out. C&C loved!My flatscreen may have stuffed up the colours. Again.
Time spent: Way too long.
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thespook [link]
modulis-textures [link]
Edit1: Made the guy's left eye slightly bigger. Still awkward looking?
Edit2: More fiddling around. Defined the hilt and guy's eye a bit more.
Shifted the girl's left eye. Shortened her right eye. Prolly only 'bout 2 pixel differences but hopefully the overall effect is one thats less weird.
Thanks Soulster!
Edit3: Fiddles around the eyes even more. Can't thank you enough for pointing these out <3
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Comments: 56
So much praise can be given to this... but I'm bad at putting my thoughts into coherent words... so I'll just say it the only way I know how:
WAAA~! It's so pretty! D:
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i always loved this entry 
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Mmmm! Thanks! And for the link too >w<
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I love your coloring, it creates a very nice atmosphere. My one prob would be the sword, and not even a huge prob. The perspective is great, it just feels a little flat, like a cardboard cut out.
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Oh yes. I really need to work at making the figues more solid.
Will definately be keeping your comment in mind next time I ch
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Beautiful.
em I know someone already mentioned this so you can shoot me if you want ;_; the mans right eye should be a little bigger and i dunno maybe they hsould be tilted a little inward....and this could be just my imagination but the girl's forhead looks a bit too small.
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Nono, it just means I'm really blind to my mistakes. Thanks to you it can now look slightly less awkward!
Thankyou! <33
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It's so pretty!!!
Guy's left eye is really strange looking yeah and girl's left eye too.
But I love the sword and outfits they totally rock!!
I love it
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Pinched and tweaked the eyes like crazy. Impoved?
Thanks Ching! (my bro disagrees with you on the sword tho xD)
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love the bg ^_^ ~<3
wow, yo's nose is like without lineart ish, so pro. just a bit small >.>or is it just me.
wow, color's so perfect >_=
so this is what yo's been up to on da holz.....lol.such a slow worker.
ah, but the boy boy's left eye is still.....
yay~draw long hair boy boy's next time >_< n make them pretty (together) *runs away b4 getting hit*
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No you're right, the guy's eye is off u___u
>D Don't you suggest such a thing! *throws skillet after you*
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huh? what did I sugget? what did u throw after me?
HAPPY BDAY HONEY!!!<3
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......u threw that at me.....
*sound of heart breaking*
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Skillet, its like a baulky frying pan. And it deals a mighty of of damage when throw 8DD
Thanks Ting. Go easy on the honey. Plzkay?
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yeapz. coming back soon <3
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fdaskdlfas!!!
CRIIIMPLE! *stabs you with a dozen knives*
Give me your talent! Dx
lol, seriously.
This looks so wonderful...
Specially the contrast of red on the girl's gown. Makes it look really lush <3
Aaah. I've always wanted to try OC but there's not a store in this area that has OC D:
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DDD:
*bleeds so called talent all over the floor*
Thanks saori-chan ^w^
You can get the earlier versions of OC with a guide here. And its free!
[link]
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With the sword, i think the hilt needs more work ^^ Cause atm its like...the metal blade, and bits of hilt stuck on either side kinda...<.<
And I thiiiiiink...repeat...I thiiiiink the chick's right eye maybe too big...or something...something about the chicks face disturbs lil me XD
Dw about your colours they're always fine 
Me like the sun rays coming down o.O So subtle, so pretty o.O *touches suns rays* hehehehehe
Hmm maybe the guy's eyes need more work, cuz to me he looks stoned hahahah
Bewdifuul costumes X3 Brilliant colourings X3
^-^ Goooo Yoooo :3
~Your "friendly" "neighbourhood" "critic" Justin... <.< Heehehehheehhe
Ps > See u @ ice skating?
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Onto it! The opinion of my friendly neighbourhood critic must be pondered upon. Seriously. Thankyouuu >w<
Went back and tweaked it there and there keeping your comments in mind. No drastic changes, but any less weird now?
Iceskating? When? Where? No one tells me anything ;___;
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Heheheheheh Yo's so funny
Ummm ice skating on Friday 10-12 + 1-3. Sarah's organizing should be a better turn out than last time :3 Come come Yo skatey skatey wheee
~J
Yaaaaay for picture *claps claps*
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Will try to make it
*has a weird feeling there's a driving lesson on that day >>*
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Lol awwww o0o0o0o drive ure instructor to ice skating too
~J
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My God! I've created a perfect piece of art! x3
Sankyuuu
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Yaaaay go you!!!! You're welcome!!
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Aww thanks. You're too kind >w<
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Hrm... I kinda agree about the eye thing :0 ...And the girl's left arm looks a bit odd, but that's probably just me.
Amazing coloring *__* Can't believe you did that with Elements! x3 <333
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Tweaked the eye a bit. Too afraid to touch the arm since all the colouring's done on 1 layer, but I see what you mean.
Thanks heaps for pointing them out! *w*
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Awww~ it so pretty! The expressions and colors are awesome~ love the outfits too. Amazing amount of detail 8D
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Yepyep. Still have a long way to go ^_____^v
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Guuuuhhh. *sigh* yep
I've seen more dangerous looking er, sporks u_______u;
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HOLY FREAKIN' WOW~ That is AMAZING! I LOVE the shading and textures! <3
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That is, by far the most exuberant comment I've received *w* Thanks, thanks and thanks!
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Really? I'd kill for you mad Skillz. *dies* <3 It just so awesome, ya know?
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....what hapend to his eye??!?!..
the rest is goood!!
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...it got lost in the grand scheme of things >__o
Made it slightly bigger. Any better?
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