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Published: 2004-09-20 01:08:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Description Can you not remember?
Last December
When you were so fragile
I could hold you in the palm of my hand
Stripped to nonsense
A shadow of a man
And I’d confiscate
Wine glasses and sharp objects
And give my body for your distraction
Jumping through hoops
For a bit of your attention
You never had a good excuse
For the misuse of your passions
All the while you’re sharing soup
And snuggles with others
Whom you deemed more worthy
Than my never-ending security
And still, I’m not angry
I’m just pining away
Someday, someday, someday
You’ll know what’s good for you.
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Comments: 8

Maximus-Lindenbaum [2004-09-23 12:26:34 +0000 UTC]

This is wonderful piece Phurr. I wish the phish could take your pain away and put it in a little box locked deep in a cabinet somewhere. You are too good of a person to deal woth so much crap kido. 143. -Maximus

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creepydolly In reply to Maximus-Lindenbaum [2004-09-23 19:27:46 +0000 UTC]

1432 Phishie.

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ceiteach [2004-09-22 01:58:40 +0000 UTC]

I am no critic, but I find your form of expression to be wonderful...

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creepydolly In reply to ceiteach [2004-09-22 05:27:36 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou

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Citrus-Goldfish [2004-09-20 03:47:33 +0000 UTC]

Man, I love your stuff jenna. Your fucking great at putting a person into feelings you where experiencing with just words. HOw fucking awesome you are.

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creepydolly In reply to Citrus-Goldfish [2004-09-20 03:50:13 +0000 UTC]

awww. Thankyou.

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Citrus-Goldfish In reply to creepydolly [2004-09-20 06:21:11 +0000 UTC]

ANytime doll...i <3 the jen

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The-Shirtless-Hobo [2004-09-20 01:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Poetry is a great way to express yourself, and you did that well in this poem.

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