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courglas — Love Me or Leave Me Alone
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Published: 2013-07-31 00:52:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 314; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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How much can one take, until seen through?How long should one wait, when waiting on you?
We're all busy with life,
~so love me or leave me to die.
How much can one say, till you get a clue?
How long should one sway, when swaying for you?
you're not ready, if you don't know
~love me or leave me alone.
How long does one stay when they are true?
How long until you realize the truth?
Even if I'm not the one for you,
currently, it's only you and me
~either love me or just set me free.
How much pain can one tolerate, until they are down?
How much time must we waste, until you come around?
There's no more time, you do or you don't,
~love me or leave me alone.
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for some reason this poem reminds me with this:
www.youtube.com/watch?v=nBacck…
i know the feeling
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Considering the topic of conversation in the Bistro, I would have to agree. Although however, the context of what I was referring to is a little different in this particular piece. If you feel like listening, here's the song on youtube. www.youtube.com/watch?v=VP61YP…
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i did listen to it
voice was kinda too noisy to make out the words properly sadly
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hahaha, then I guess I'd better make a better version.
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Wow seems like I've already watched it before. You are just now posting the lyrics. For shame.
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Actually, it was posted in a journal a really long time ago, just a little before I performed the song and finished the lyrics. I edited both the lyrics in the deviation and in the journal to the correct ones, but they were there, I just thought maybe I'd take some of the journals that I put stuff like this in, and just post the deviation.
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I don't really look at journals to much so that prob explains why I don't remember seeing it
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60% of my journals are typically artsy, so to speak. (not that I counted, but that's my estimate.)
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I'm lucky if I even bother to write one. My perfectionism makes any kind of writing a pain even if it supposed to be the entry to a diary.
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Typically, I would call myself a perfectionist in that I am critical of myself and my own words, however, there is a tiny niche inbetween that and expressionism where when I write expressively and for myself, rather than for other people, it's more of getting something off my chest without telling everyone what it is, and in this form, it comes out as poetry to the world, and to me, I know exactly what I'm referring to, and can look back on it.
Poems, like Watermelon, and I've Lost are good examples.
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Hahah my perfectionism is from what I think of my work. Not would other people think. It is whether or not I am expressing what I want to say correctly.
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My perfectionism then, comes from what I think a viewer should get from my work when critically reviewing my work. But likewise, or otherwise, if I can portray exactly what I want to reflect, perfectly, that a reader gets that message, then it has done it's job perfectly, down to the last word, sensation, and period. More or less the same as you are saying I suppose.
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So, how was listening to it?
-again,
hahahahahahahahaha
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I like it even better now lol
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That's good to know. I suppose that means perhaps it somehow grew on you despite the horrendous fuck up on the solo.
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It's the thrill of performing live. Sometimes it is a hit. Sometimes it is a miss. Doesn't mean the work is bad or even the whole performance for that matter.
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Nah, that light in my face finally got to me, and I had to squint to see what I was doing on that guitar, let me tell you, and I shoulda just kept the solo simple. The vocals were fine, and I'm actually impressed I sounded that good, that long ago, and the chords are nice, but that solo, sets me from great to just good.
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And such a shame that you couldn't be great *shakes head*
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Should have been smarter about it, but I took a risk, and it would have payed off if I played it right, and though I recovered after that mess up in the middle of the solo into the end part of the solo, I could have seriously made it simpler just for the performance, or practiced even more than I already did. It is what it is now.
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Yes which is why you shouldn't brood and just look forward to the next performance. There is always the next time to get it right. Or you can quit and that is the end of it. Either way no brooding.
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I'm not brooding. It just annoys me anytime I go back and listen to it, since it's the only recording I have of it currently, hahahahaha.
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Make a new better recording then
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I have no reason to at the moment. It's just I notice it whenever I come back to it, and as a conscientious musician, I humbly mention it to others if they are going to listen.
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I would just erase the vid from existence and start anew but that is my problem as an artist. Never think something is good enough
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There's no point in erasing something that can be used for reference to know what I played. Nothing I record is professional (excluding the recording I did for college) and is only a means of archiving. Not to mention, the recording that is up, was done by someone else, no me, so i can't take it down, and I see no point in asking for it to be taken down.
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By all means, if that is the color of your kool-aid go with it
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Hahahhahha, well, you can now at least make the comparison between my live performing and my recorded work with that other song up. I don't usually mess up live, but it happens.
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