Comments: 8
Elgrig [2013-04-05 13:49:21 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Right let's start,here..
hmm the vision is good overall,
however the color of the subject's can be more skin can be more eye catching,thus making it appear seperated from the background.
The idea of your depiction is certainly genuine as far as my eyes have seen the depiction of this creature,as usually they are depicted very ugly,having a spider's body or extremely beautiful having the spider's body.
Therefore,the whole idea of this creature having spider legs and fangs on her face,and having spider web as a hair, while still looking relatively pretty is genuine.
The technique used is good,it doesn't look messy,or patchy and gives the wavy feel of the hair.
The impact is at the hair is very well achieved,the shine and everything, but as the whole picture itself the feel of "beautiful dangerous being" is small, the upper area of the face should be shadowed so that she appears more "aloof" and threatening.
Well that's all I've got to say,by the way,does the crest on her forehead was inspired by Ben10?
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Elgrig In reply to countmoopula [2013-04-05 14:06:19 +0000 UTC]
Ben10 is kinda new to me, like 5 years ago..
The power of the sub mind,is indeed a powerful tool
and you're welcome,it's my first critique
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eembuc1000 In reply to countmoopula [2013-04-05 13:51:58 +0000 UTC]
I guess, if you squint reeeaaaalllly hard at it.
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human-groveback [2014-02-02 08:15:25 +0000 UTC]
The hybrid aspect reminds me of what I've seen in real jorogumos. When in human form, they still have the extra eyes & chelicerae. They also still have the spinnerets. Basically, on real jorogumos (I used to date 1), the anatomy remains the same when they assume human form (aside from contorting to fit the shape): the abdomen goes where the buttocks would be (with spinnerets at the top of the butt-crack), the pedipalps become the arms), they breath through their hips, stuff like that.
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