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Published: 2009-06-16 08:31:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 587; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 35
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Description original submission again! actually this pic has done long time ago, but never hav time/ mood to submit nor write comment about this pic.

the two is my ocs, El(left) and Hako(right) from my LiaL project. they're "marion"(taken from marionette): a DNA manipulated beings (can be human or any race), with different abilities, designed to become killer machines. the symbol on their waist is a number (in "Kalz" character, my own created letter, still kinda alphabet though), represent their project code number. El is 6th marion and Hako is 0, a prototype.

about the drawing skill.. yes i noticed their big heads now lol, that cellshading projects made my 'human height sense' a bit better thanks to that. and also, their bodies' kinda too thin, btw im still remember clearly, i was using rei ayanami's body as reference lol lol

comments and critiques? thank you
character (c) *cosu / Lazcht
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Comments: 26

LunaticSupernova [2009-06-27 19:03:28 +0000 UTC]

eh buset....itu tangan ma badan kuk ukurannya gak jauh beda yak

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cosu In reply to LunaticSupernova [2009-06-27 19:19:44 +0000 UTC]

hyahaha emang kacau banget disini, gw aja kaget pas ngeliadnya lagi apalagi lu.

gambar ketinggalan jaman sih anatomi ini gara2 komik evangelion *cari pelarian*

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LunaticSupernova In reply to cosu [2009-06-27 19:38:02 +0000 UTC]

hahah...gw juga dulu bikin anatomi kacaw kuk...pala kegedean keak loe badan kerempeng...gara2 Angel sanctuary...

betewe...loe percaya gak kalo konsep karakternya bikinan murid gw?
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ini beneran lho^^

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Shi-Ri-Kyuu [2009-06-19 22:12:31 +0000 UTC]

G demen sama warna nya yg soft, kesannya gimanaa gitu, mskpn keliatan cuma punggung nya aja, tapi bagus,XD

cuma, coba aja orang yg sebelah kanan pinggang nya di lebarin dikit, keliatannya lebih pas tuh,XD
tapi ga jadi masalah banget krn asli nya uda bagus,XD
(g fave y,XD)

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cosu In reply to Shi-Ri-Kyuu [2009-06-20 07:20:21 +0000 UTC]

tengkyuu, hehe itu emang kaco banget kalo diliad skr, kapan2 mungkin pengen bikin lagi nih punggung2 wkwkw nanti pasti gw pratiin bnr2 anatomi nya

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Shi-Ri-Kyuu In reply to cosu [2009-06-20 07:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Sama2 semoga berhasil ntar nya y,XD
u mah pasti bisa lah

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Resha04 [2009-06-17 11:03:38 +0000 UTC]

Keren lhoo!!!!!

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sena-nightsaber [2009-06-17 02:07:30 +0000 UTC]

coloringnya gak perlu dikritik lagi dah...udah keren

yg kanan, kok proporsi badannya...bahkan walopun emang kurus, tapi harus diperhitungkan lingkar badan yg 'logis'

kalo kaya gitu kaya ga punya tulang rusuk >o<

but overall, it's a nice pic

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cosu In reply to sena-nightsaber [2009-06-17 18:15:55 +0000 UTC]

iye tuh tau tuh sapa sih yg gambar?! pasti matanya lamur..

wkakaak diterima banget kritikannya. ini gambar agak lama, skr sjak blajar banyak anatomi2 gt jadi kliatan banget distorsi anatominya kalo ngeliad gambar lama (kalo dulu pas bikin liad itu dari mata gw fine2 aja @_@ emang payah)ehehe makasi yak kritiknya,temen gw jg bilang soal tulang rusuk itu. wkwkw emang extreme sih distorsinya diakui

aa gw jadi pengen bikin versi barunya deh...!!

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sena-nightsaber In reply to cosu [2009-06-18 03:48:29 +0000 UTC]

hahaha...

semangat!!! \\^o^//

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emeraldyne [2009-06-16 22:03:33 +0000 UTC]

mantaph! warnanya asik bgt! btw tu tapi kayanya lingkar badannya kekecilan deh..

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cosu In reply to emeraldyne [2009-06-17 18:20:05 +0000 UTC]

yg kanan? emberr wkwkw..dah tau gw bakal banyak yg kaget liad anatominya, emang anatomi waktu gambar ini masi buruk padahal, yg kanan..supposed to be a man's slim body!! grr..jadinya malah buat badan cewe aja itu gak normal akaka

smoga gambar2 baru nanti bisa jauh lebi baik..kalo yg kiri? gak gitu kliatan ya soalnya gak kesorot sampe tengah.. makasi yak kritikannya! warna mah lah boleh ngefek dari photocrot

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Kera-KeraNgalam [2009-06-16 19:13:22 +0000 UTC]

wau trnyt mrk smacem sibork!! keren XDD

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cosu In reply to Kera-KeraNgalam [2009-06-17 18:22:05 +0000 UTC]

yg kanan itu cyborg (campuran mesin-orang), yg kiri masi biologic kok, cuman dimanip aja dna nya jadi kayak mutant macam XMEN gitu.. *lho*

hehe chara u yg alt itu jg setengah robot y

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Kera-KeraNgalam In reply to cosu [2009-06-18 10:33:36 +0000 UTC]

wah cyborg jd kl dibdah kliatan kabel2 gt dung XD

trus yg atuny mutasi gen gt y,,? keren


kaga >>™
itu artifisial,,tp strukturny ms org,,cm 'inti'ny aja yg gini dan gitu*gjlas* XDDDD makasih dah tanya

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cosu In reply to Kera-KeraNgalam [2009-06-19 18:00:15 +0000 UTC]

eheheh gw suka kok oc2 makanya suka penasaran aja..

masi mayoritas badan orang si.. di bagian yg tertentu aja yg mesin (kalo itu namanya android kali ya?) ah gak ngerti jg. yg atunya iya mutan genius loh critanya wuakakak *sowhatgitulohh*

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Kera-KeraNgalam In reply to cosu [2009-06-26 05:13:00 +0000 UTC]

hoo bgetu

wele wah,,diapain aja tuh kok cm sbagian yg mesin,,abis dimutilasi y

iyalah jenius XD mutan gt XD

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cosu In reply to Kera-KeraNgalam [2009-06-26 12:27:35 +0000 UTC]

critanya ada bagian yg dah ancur kena serangan apa gitu~ hehe spoil dikit. diganti mesin de yg rusak.^^

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Kera-KeraNgalam In reply to cosu [2009-06-26 13:08:46 +0000 UTC]

wah kecelakaan ya

*mojok* maap dah menuduh yg tidak2 TT

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cosu In reply to Kera-KeraNgalam [2009-06-27 19:13:22 +0000 UTC]

wakaka serius amat ampe mojok

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Kera-KeraNgalam In reply to cosu [2009-06-28 07:34:24 +0000 UTC]

yay XD


abis sy ndiri bs ngamuk kl ada yg ngomong ane2

har2

*kemplang*

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animemangalovers [2009-06-16 18:43:29 +0000 UTC]

warnanya keren bo

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cosu In reply to animemangalovers [2009-06-19 18:56:48 +0000 UTC]

arigato

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Fortranica [2009-06-16 09:35:22 +0000 UTC]

keyen desu~ warnanya saia suka, tranquil bgt

kl blh kritik, bagian cowo yg di sebelah kanan...kesanny badannya agk gepeng ke kanan. harusnya garis badannya lebih ke kiri biar pas

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cosu In reply to Fortranica [2009-06-16 13:19:24 +0000 UTC]

woh emang diminta kripik kok! akakak iye tuh tulang punggungnya gak beres, salah dimensi jg tulang lehernya loh kapan2 pengen gambar lagi punggung, saia suka tampak blakang *gak normal*

ah warna mah bisa2nya si potocrot makasi ya komen pertama

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Fortranica In reply to cosu [2009-06-19 00:55:44 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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