PeachyPoof [2018-11-14 23:14:21 +0000 UTC]
tIME TO DO A CRITIQUE AGFAIN CUZ IM TRYING TO BE A GOOD FRIEND:
- the pose is cute but its really shifted towards the right. i think thats what you intended, but maybe turn the legs so that tofu looks balanced and not kind of falling over and dying
- we can't see the shoulders clearly, but they don't really match/line up properly? try to draw a sketch of the entire thing before you think of the parts hidden by the hand, bag, etc.
- the legs are kind of confusing and they look bent??
(disclaimer: i know literally nothing about art so don't listen to me)
also this is really heccing cute
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