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pegacorngem12 [2012-08-19 01:20:07 +0000 UTC]
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Ok, this is my first Critique, so dont be bad to me.
First of all, I would like to say this is an amazing piece of art.
There is a few thing I would like to point out however.
In the first box, it has the big emote looking like its floating, while the other 2 boxes have the emotes bottom flat on the ground.
Also, I think it would be a bit more realistic if the glass windows on the van were maybe broken.
Overall, a great piece of art, lovely shading, animation, and I LOVE IT. Alot!
♥~Sarah~♥
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RoninFox [2009-12-08 20:14:37 +0000 UTC]
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This strip pushes all the right buttons! Quirky, cute and clever concept, lovely and colorful graphics, excellent animation, and to top it off, lots of expressiveness and character. The facial expressions on the characters really bring them to life, and lend tons of comedic value. I particularly love the attention to detail, from the subtle highlights in the giant emoticon's eyes, to the puddle of drool, to the little chocolate chips in the ice cream, and finally the fist-shaking tirade of the ice cream man in the last panel. The animation is so smooth and natural. It's definitely a piece that one just can't stop watching!
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Canfex [2009-10-16 17:24:59 +0000 UTC]
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I love how this came! It's a perfect mix between pixel art, animation and comic! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD" />
The textures and colors used looks great, and the message is funny of course. I think the first scene needs more animation, because it looks too plain comparated with the other scenes, but anyways, it's a great work we have here e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
Also, the animation is very well-done, specially the part when the big emote wants to chase the ice cream car; the driving of the car looks very realistic, also, the fact you did a big emote and a small emote doesn't look strange...I say, both look like an emote; the texture and the lights/shadows looks equal. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
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CookiemagiK In reply to Canfex [2009-10-16 23:11:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much ^^
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Noah-is-1337-at-art [2009-09-27 22:53:54 +0000 UTC]
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First off, let me just give you a e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Thumbs Up" /> because this is an amazing piece of work. The expressions are great, and it made me laugh so hard. The pixel work in general is amazing. Just one or two things I wanna point out. Well, out on the middle strip, since the Emoticon is so big, he'd maybe take a second or two to hop back up again, letting the ice cream truck get away, but then jumping right back behind it again. On the third strip, when he has the ice cream truck in his mouth, the shine at the top of the wheel seems to disappear for a few frames while it's spinning. Making the emotes blink would be a nice touch. And when the green emote is yelling at the big emote, one of the little symbols showing the fact that he's cursing doesn't quite fit in with the rest of the little symbols, but I guess that's just me. Also a background would make it really spectacular. This is an amazing emoticon, and very well deserving of the DD. Great job!
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Deathbal101 In reply to The-12th-Doctor86 [2009-07-16 16:06:45 +0000 UTC]
This is one of the worst critiques I've ever seen.
a) Don't use smilies. That looks pants on head retarded.
b) Too many acronyms. LOL does not belong.
c) All you did was say 'lol thats funny lol', and pointed out nothing that was wrong with it.
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ThisAndThatArt In reply to CookiemagiK [2009-06-18 21:47:18 +0000 UTC]
You are very welcome, I would love to see more.
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