andyending [2020-07-10 19:56:22 +0000 UTC]

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thesquareroot [2020-03-13 03:43:59 +0000 UTC]

"... teeth clicking into a smile like champagne glasses shattering in an over-enthusiastic toast"

that gives me the tingles ... like some brand of literary asmr

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Lionnfart [2020-03-12 23:58:49 +0000 UTC]

I had to read this over a few times to let it fully sink in. your breath and rhythm here is wonderful - and the imagery is superb. thank you for sharing.

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Eefera [2020-03-12 05:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh I love the stream of consciousness style of this so much. 
Beautiful! I'll definitely be checking out the rest of your gallery.

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hopeburnsblue [2020-02-19 04:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Stunning.

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Nullibicity [2020-02-13 21:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Love the metaphors of the sun as lemon slices and a sudden smile as champagne toasts! It’s all full and wistful, like thinking back on summer days, with a few squeezes of bittersweet thoughts on longing. So you may feel out of practice, but this was beautiful and visceral.

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beeswingblue [2020-02-09 23:11:15 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done.

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squibblyquill [2020-02-05 03:34:18 +0000 UTC]

This is sweet.

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