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Scribbling-Mima [2016-03-28 19:44:02 +0000 UTC]
She's looking really good! *0*
That smug smile, though XD
And I love her personality and how she interacts with her brother, this is so cool! They're quite the contrast to the sibling relationship between Sena and Pepper XD
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Scribbling-Mima In reply to ClayLynn [2016-03-28 21:02:15 +0000 UTC]
I love characters who are not afraid of showing their smug smiles XD
Lol, same here! I just love to have siblings picking at each other at every opportunity, but then uniting and supporting each other whenever some outsider tries to do the same >u<
Sena's and Pepper's relationship may seem happier, but I want to make a point on their story of that not really being the case: while they seem satisfied that way, Sena being overprotective is not a good thing for Pepper's development, which only feeds his dependency on her and makes Sena get worse, and if they really wish to improve themselves as people Sena should believe more on Pepper and he should be more proactive and try to hold his own, leaving Sena's shadow ~
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Scribbling-Mima In reply to ClayLynn [2016-03-28 21:28:15 +0000 UTC]
OMG now I can't stop picturing Mavi throwing an angry monologue at someone who just picked on Yukon and hugging him protectively, while Yukon is looking all annoyed XD
I hope to someday get this written down, I do have some ideas for how to start the story of my Articularias (probably a standalone chapter or oneshot presenting Sena and Pepper and their dream, and from that start writing sequential chapters that would develop more on their work to reach their dream, presenting the other Articularias, having some conflicts or problems they have to solve here and there...)
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ClayLynn In reply to Scribbling-Mima [2016-03-28 21:45:01 +0000 UTC]
Ehe, YES! It's perfect too, 'cause Mavi is pretty short (around 5 foot exactly) so imaging her telling off someone tall who just picked on Yukon? It's like imaging a Chihuahua barking at a Great Dane. XD
Depending on the situation, Yukon would be super annoyed, or just really, really, embarrassed. XD
Whenever you do start writing it down, I look forward to reading it! <3
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Scribbling-Mima In reply to ClayLynn [2016-03-28 22:08:49 +0000 UTC]
That would be too funny to see XD
I hope that with these small writing challenges and prompts that I'll try I'll get back to writing stories, and hopefully I'll find the inspiration and will to work on this one too ~
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ClayLynn In reply to Scribbling-Mima [2016-03-28 22:36:02 +0000 UTC]
Mhmm! I look forward to seeing what you do with your writing prompt journal as well~ :'D
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