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Description Here are the Crimson Claws, a 4 man squad of mercenary/pirates who make up in quality what they lack in quantity.

Galen is the leader, nephew of Swift, an original Wind Wolf. His father, Sirus, Swift's much younger brother, was bitter at Swift's taking of the pirate ship Hurricane and her turning it and its crew to the service of Terra Arborea. He left to form his own pirate band with the aid of the Crystal Gauntlet, an artifact similar to the Crystal Manica borne by Drake, Perin, and most recently Kestrel. He retired to start a family much later than his sister and the Wind Wolves, so Sirus' son is only a little older than the Wind Wolves' grandchildren.
Galen has inherited all of his father's hatred of the Wind Wolves and all they stand for, as well as his father's small, fast pirate carrier ship, the Vortex. He set about recruiting his own crew and despite being merely 17 years old, is gaining a reputation for cunning and brutality. Dark Ace generally advises Master Cyclonis against hiring the Crimson Claws since he regards Galen as little more than an arrogant puppy, untrustworthy and uncontrollable.

The raptor twins, Preen and Phlex, have a complicated and troubled past. Born from the same egg, they defy the laws of nature. Such a thing could not have occurred without the aid of the dark magic and crystal knowledge of the Bog Witch, an ancient raptor residing on Terra Fauna. She hatched them both safe and healthy, but extracted a promise from their mother that she would have the girl-child in a few years- in classic fairy tale fashion. As it happened Preen was given little choice in the matter. Rejected by their nest mates, taunted and shunned, eventually their sibs went too far in cornering Preen and threatening to push her off a cliff. Phlex, aware of his sister's trouble through their telepathic twin-bond, came to her rescue...and between the two of them, they slaughtered their sibs. Even on Bogaton, such a crime could not go unpunished, and the two were exiled forever from their Terra. Their mother sent them both to live with the Bog Witch, where Preen was a natural at crystalmancy, particularly with Flora and Fauna crystals, as well as darker Shadow Magics, similar yet different to the powers wielded by Cyclonis - her skill undoubtedly due to the magics she was exposed to in the egg. Meanwhile, Phlex trained to his limits against the terrifying creatures of Terra Fauna, becoming his beloved sister's sword and shield. Galen found them quite by accident, but sensing a violence and bitterness seething in them to equal his own, he was quick to recruit them to his side.

Last is Skirr, once a young Murk Raider at the bottom of the totem pole named Squab, picked on and tormented by the older and larger Raiders. His species is unknown...he seems to be some kind of mutated Merb. There's no doubt that he's not quite right in the head, but Galen recognized the brilliance behind the madness and snatched him away from Scabulous. Skirr has a genius for explosions, and he's been developing his own crystal-powered muskets and pistols, shrinking the technology of carrier ship cannons to useful personal size, even for someone as scrawny and short as he is. He tends to cackle and talk to himself a lot, but he is a crack shot and Galen would rather have Skirr's guns beside him than on the other side of a battle. No, he didn't lose his right eye in an unfortunate experiment - yet. He wears a focusing crystal in that lens to see farther for lining up shots.

The Crimson Claws are mercenaries when they're being paid, and pirates when they aren't. They've worked for the Cyclonians on several occasions...and have also raided Cyclonian ships when times get lean. No job is too brutal for any of these young killers. Having heard rumors of surviving Wind Wolves in the southern Terras, Galen has brought his squad out of the western sky lanes to try and track down these last remaining scions of the Arborean squad so he can put his father's ghost to rest.

pencil and ink, scanned and colored with PS6. Background compliments of SaturnGrl's tutorial ^_^
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Comments: 30

6liza6 [2012-01-20 10:15:39 +0000 UTC]

awsome design on the charcters X3
loving the scuad sign to!

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Cirago In reply to 6liza6 [2012-01-21 17:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it! Thanks for the comment! ^_^

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6liza6 In reply to Cirago [2012-01-22 12:30:00 +0000 UTC]

No prob :3 awsome gallery btw

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MisterFlibbles [2010-10-25 10:58:50 +0000 UTC]

Those are some HAWT Raptors. 0_o
Dayna says;

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Cirago In reply to MisterFlibbles [2010-10-25 14:53:13 +0000 UTC]

*laugh* thanks! your little Jiraiya icon makes it all worthwhile! ^_^

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MisterFlibbles In reply to Cirago [2010-10-26 12:47:23 +0000 UTC]

I freaking love the jiraiya icon. XD

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SuperTerabite [2010-09-06 13:49:32 +0000 UTC]

the outifits are so cool!

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Cirago In reply to SuperTerabite [2010-09-06 15:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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SuperTerabite In reply to Cirago [2010-09-07 09:50:59 +0000 UTC]

welcome ^^

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HaileyMarshall [2009-03-21 00:02:30 +0000 UTC]

COOL!!! 8D

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Imperator-Zor [2009-01-11 04:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Damn Good Original Squadron.

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Cirago In reply to Imperator-Zor [2009-01-13 05:36:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I was feeling rather sympathetic for the bad guys in this fandom, and decided they could use a hand ^_^

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Mayuen [2009-01-07 15:28:14 +0000 UTC]

Cool : D Love the design of the characthers and the claw in the bg

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Cirago In reply to Mayuen [2009-01-08 06:06:14 +0000 UTC]

why, thank you! Characters are OCs based on the Storm Hawks universe, and the claw in the background is their squadron's symbol/sigil. I actually made the Claw design first, and then thought it would be a really cool squadron symbol and designed the characters around that central idea ^_^

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Mayuen In reply to Cirago [2009-01-08 18:12:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I love the raptors design and the hand... weapon thingie x3

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Cirago In reply to Mayuen [2009-01-13 06:17:14 +0000 UTC]

The Crystal Gauntlet is pretty nifty ^_^ keep an eye out...hopefully I'll get a more action-y pic of Galen and the Gauntlet up in a few weeks

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Xekstrin [2009-01-05 23:33:27 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, I'm loving the raptor twins! Preen and Phlex- aaaaaah I get it I get it, that's so cool, I mean, you mean, "preen" as in to preen in the mirror and "phlex" = "flex" like muscles, right?

I've often thought about creating a scientific character who could create guns by miniaturizing cannon technology. *sigh* ah well, if you don't use an idea right away it's bound to get snatched up.

I want more information on this weapon Galen has....

*thumbs up* They are awesome villains!

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Cirago In reply to Xekstrin [2009-01-06 06:55:39 +0000 UTC]

*grin* thanks! Glad you like them ^_^ I'm also particularly fond of the raptors...I just couldn't stand to give them 'snot' names like Repton's family has.

And no reason you can't also have a science character...I mean, every squad needs someone to repair their machines and weapons, so I took it for granted that everyone has someone like that. For the first-gen Windwolves it was Buzz, and second-gen had both Goss and Lanner capable of techy-stuff...with the Crimson Claws being bad guys, it just made sense that their tech dude would be more focused on weaponry and instruments of destruction!

The Crystal Gauntlet, like the Manica held by the Windwolves, can channel multiple crystals to either create combo effects from different kinds of crystals, or extremely powerful techniques from similar element-types. But where the Manica is primarily meant for defense, the Gauntlet is definitely an offensive piece of equipment. Not one for subtleties, Galen has packed every slot with fire-type crystals - blazars, inferno crystals, and the main slot holds a rare nova crystal. Galen enjoys hand-to-hand combat with it, since it has both sharp claws and a concentrated 'burning fist' ability, causing his prey burn damage with almost every strike, but a secondary ability allows him to turn anything he holds in that hand - from a sword to a piece of debris - into a fire-type weapon. Its final ability that he has unlocked is the classic 'fireball' - a combined burst from several of the fire crystals into a potent and long range ball of seething flame. There are other techniques, but luckily he hasn't discovered them yet.

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RyuuShogun [2009-01-05 08:23:58 +0000 UTC]

dang, looks good! i could think of one group to take them on.

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Cirago In reply to RyuuShogun [2009-01-06 07:02:26 +0000 UTC]

*grin* I don't see why not...they do tend to piss almost everyone off through their piracy, and they've been most places in Atmos. But they're good enough that people are willing to swallow their anger and hire them as mercenaries to target someone else if the need arises. So it's entirely likely that they've caused various OCs some sort of trouble, if only indirectly by hitting ships from someone's home terra. Or stepped on other villains' toes with their casual arrogance!

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RyuuShogun In reply to Cirago [2009-01-06 07:19:18 +0000 UTC]

True enough, but i was more thinking of oh maybe these Four getting in an all out fight [link]

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Cirago In reply to RyuuShogun [2009-01-06 19:01:56 +0000 UTC]

oooooh...now there's a thought ^_^

Preen, with her mastery of Flora and Fauna crystals, poisons and antidotes, would be a good match for Plague/Pestilence...Phlex, of course, would be matched against War. Skirr, being the scrawny one, would have to tangle with Famine...and of course Galen would fight Death.

Of course...there isn't a lot of reason for them to fight, really. The Claws are more than happy to see strife and suffering throughout the Atmos. Not because they're inherently evil (although that may play some part...) but because as mercenaries, conflict is good for business. Your Four are inadvertently helping the Claws, and Galen is smart enough to know this. He'd have absolutely no reason to accept a contract to fight his breadbaskets. Except *snicker* for the cause of Love and Justice!!!! ...and I just don't see that happening with him.

Now, if the Four went from general mayhem to actually posing a direct and imminent threat to ending the Atmos - and therefore business opportunities - that might force the Claws to join forces with the good guys in order to stop them, which could put them on the path to redemption.

*grin* but they have many more dirty deeds to do before that time comes!

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RyuuShogun In reply to Cirago [2009-01-07 03:55:29 +0000 UTC]

Totally true.. When i made the F.O.C.'s it was because i was into the whole horsemen of the apocalypse at the time and wanted to make some the SH universe might have. ^_^

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GreatWTF [2009-01-05 07:30:43 +0000 UTC]

*whistles* Sweet character set. I would not want to tangle with them.

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Cirago In reply to GreatWTF [2009-01-06 07:02:51 +0000 UTC]

many thanks! that was the idea I was trying to get across ^_^

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GreatWTF In reply to Cirago [2009-01-06 07:41:42 +0000 UTC]

And now the fact that I live under a rock comes into play. How I survived living with my nephews for a month and not learning about Storm Hawks is beyond me, but now thanks to you I am very much hooked. *watches characters run screaming in fright*

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Cirago In reply to GreatWTF [2009-01-06 19:05:19 +0000 UTC]

*chuckle* add one more to the fandom!

It took me a while to get used to the art...and eventually you do get tired of having the Storm Hawks always win against adults with years more experience and training...but meh. It's a kids' show. And the premise and technology are pretty damn cool!

I'm not really a fan fiction reader myself...but sometimes, with shows like these, the fanfiction can be better than some of the episodes. It might be worth checking into, if you like the world and characters ^_^

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GreatWTF In reply to Cirago [2009-01-06 19:30:50 +0000 UTC]

The artist in me dies by pieces every time I watch it, but being a fan of very old and poorly animated animes I can live with it. I love the technology of the series and I'm going to be chasing plot bunnies for weeks after this. ^_^ I'll have to check the fanfiction now.

Why is it the kids shows seem to have so much appeal now? I'm seeing that pop up more and more.

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Cirago In reply to GreatWTF [2009-01-07 04:35:02 +0000 UTC]

mm...some of it is probably nostalgia factor...and some of it is probably related to the fact that a good geek never grows up ^_^

Plus, a bunch of the 80s geeks are all grown up now, working in Hollywood and for various networks. They've got all the nostalgia for the good old days, but have realized just how bad those old shows were. So they've set their sights on making kids shows that are a whole lot better, with jokes their own generation can enjoy and sometimes even multiple layers for multiple age groups. Of course, they're stuck within network limits, which is why shows like Storm Hawks have incredible potential for complex and darker story lines, but will never pursue them...since the network see it as aimed at the pre-teen/tween male group, and they won't do anything to alienate the parents of that age group, or risk writing a plot line that could go over the wee lads' heads.
Hence the need to depend on fanfic *wince* however painful it might be to find the true jewels in the rough.

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GreatWTF In reply to Cirago [2009-01-07 04:44:40 +0000 UTC]

That might explain it. You've got shows like Avatar and Storm Hawks running around and it's no small wonder the older group almost seems to like them more than the younger. Granted, some of the old cartoons weren't all that bad, copious amounts of cheese aside. I spaz out every time I see a new Transformers toy in Wal-Mart and I nearly had a heart attack when my brother showed up last night with a Cheetor toy.

I'm sure Storm Hawks can't compete with Harry Potter and TMNT on bad fanfiction, though. The things I've read can make the eyes bleed.

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