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Published: 2007-08-11 05:53:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 25898; Favourites: 800; Downloads: 24
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Description Yay! I'm proud of this! Fortunatly for you folks my very talented friend was kind enough to write a short story for this, for which I am very grateful! I'm going to share said story here. Enjoy!!


Waiting was the hard part. Fighting enemies, running for her life, anything was better than standing around, twiddling her thumbs, waiting. Even this would have been more bearable if she wasnt currently wading thigh-high through a mucky, cold river.
"Stupid hounds," she muttered soundlessly, because everything had been going according to plan until the enemy had sent out the scent hounds, forcing her not only into this mucky river, but to seperate from Naruto.
"Everything for the mission," she muttered again, but the river wasn't what ate at her brain as she waited.
Naruto was late.
Biting her lip, thumbs still going, she decided to give him a few more minutes before she broke protocol and went to search for him.
The time passed impaitently for her, and she was just about to quit waiting once and for all, but she heard the water riple before she had a chance to move.
Melding back into the shadows, Sakura formed an attack plan and escape route as her hand inched for her weapon pouch. Before she could get a hold of a kunai a familiar voice called softly to her.
"Sakura?"
Letting out a shaky lung-full of air-she had forgotten to breathe while she formulated-and stepped angrily from the shadows.
"You're late!" she hissed at Naruto, abandoning all caution by storming towards him. "You frustrating, moronic..." she cut off as she stabbed him in the chest with an accusing finger. "What happened?"
Ignoring her scowl, Naruto wrapped his arms around Sakura, drawing her closer.
"I was making sure the dogs couldn't find us, " he told her leaning down to whisper "I'm okay," into her mouth, letting his lips brush hers.
Sakura's eyes fluttered closed and, ignoring the smell of the muck they still stood almost waist deep in, she breathed in his scent before leaning into the kiss.
After a moment, Naruto pulled away, leaving her breathless, and smirked at her. "Now what were you saying?" he asked, blue eyes crinkling in amusement.
"What?" she mumbled, eyes heavy as she leaned against his chest dizzily
"You're mad at me," he reminded her, grin widening crookedly.
She leaned back to look up, blinked once, and wrinkled her nose at him. "You're a rotten cheater, I hope you know."
His face lit up to it's fullest extent, and he nodded enthusiasticly in agreement.
With a growl, Sakura pulled his face back down, telling him "I'll finish being angry later."

End!

I hope you enjoy both of these. Any grammatical mistakes in the story are my own, in the retyping of it.
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Comments: 133

chunkymacaroni In reply to ??? [2008-08-12 14:22:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Thank you so much!

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petlover91 In reply to chunkymacaroni [2008-09-12 15:55:28 +0000 UTC]

no problem....I love your art...!!!

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Ashayami [2008-08-08 16:51:28 +0000 UTC]

OH Greeeaaattt!!! And your friend's story is also greaaaat!!!! O__O... I'm happy TwT... Now I can die in peace !

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the-kender [2008-07-30 05:29:06 +0000 UTC]

Beatigul job x3

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chunkymacaroni In reply to the-kender [2008-08-06 03:48:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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the-kender In reply to chunkymacaroni [2008-08-06 04:58:00 +0000 UTC]

No problem :3

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Ashruka-Krusnik [2008-05-21 15:51:42 +0000 UTC]

Nice & Awesome Picture! Oh & tell your friend Cute story.

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chunkymacaroni In reply to Ashruka-Krusnik [2008-06-05 14:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and she will be glad to hear that!

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Ashruka-Krusnik In reply to chunkymacaroni [2008-06-05 16:43:38 +0000 UTC]

You Welcome

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cozza1 [2008-05-13 18:32:38 +0000 UTC]

adorable picture and the story was amusing too lol

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cozza1 In reply to cozza1 [2008-06-05 19:05:50 +0000 UTC]

random pic i no but u shud do picturs and like becum an artist!!

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cozza1 In reply to cozza1 [2008-06-05 19:06:27 +0000 UTC]

random pic =

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chunkymacaroni In reply to cozza1 [2008-06-05 14:41:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and she will be glad to hear that!

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ilovekakashi28 [2008-04-14 20:10:39 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job! Very cute! Its good to meet other narusaku fans, especially one's that do alot of narusaku art!

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chunkymacaroni In reply to ilovekakashi28 [2008-04-15 01:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, ahah yeah.

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ilovekakashi28 In reply to chunkymacaroni [2008-04-15 02:15:33 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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fairywarrioress [2008-04-01 09:02:37 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful picture and my credits to the writer as-well

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catsi563 [2008-03-14 17:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful picture and great story. Very In character for both.

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chunkymacaroni In reply to catsi563 [2008-03-17 01:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'll tell her you enjoyed the story!

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Highspeed0516 [2008-02-27 17:17:33 +0000 UTC]

How Have I missed this one? Its stuff of legend, and a neat little story too!

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chunkymacaroni In reply to Highspeed0516 [2008-02-27 17:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'll tell my friend you enjoyed her story!

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UgliestGirl [2008-02-23 19:35:32 +0000 UTC]

i do not preffer narusaku, but its pretty awesome and emotionall. great job, !

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chunkymacaroni In reply to UgliestGirl [2008-02-23 19:49:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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UgliestGirl In reply to chunkymacaroni [2008-02-23 19:50:13 +0000 UTC]

no problem! : )

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Ssafloyd [2008-02-03 06:26:49 +0000 UTC]

I love it!!
That's a really cute story too.
Way to get out of an angry rant, Naruto! lol

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chunkymacaroni In reply to Ssafloyd [2008-02-03 17:18:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And I'll be sure to tell her you enjoyed the story!

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Jayne93 [2008-01-10 12:16:02 +0000 UTC]

WATER LOVE RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay! yay! yay! though it isn't actually water but muck. but who cares! wonderful!

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legnaus [2008-01-07 06:29:27 +0000 UTC]

That looks freaking AWESOME, Both the picture AND the story!!!!

Thumbs up for both!!

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chunkymacaroni In reply to legnaus [2008-01-07 17:47:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'll tell my friend you liked the story.

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blackness1747 [2007-12-29 05:32:22 +0000 UTC]

amazing ^_^! i dunno which i love more- the fanfic, or the pic >w<

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chunkymacaroni In reply to blackness1747 [2007-12-31 23:58:50 +0000 UTC]

ahah thank you, I'll let her know you liked the story as well!

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Divinespawn [2007-12-10 21:53:21 +0000 UTC]

really a great picture and the story is nice aswell 10/5 ^^

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chunkymacaroni In reply to Divinespawn [2007-12-11 02:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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skittlegirl [2007-12-09 22:27:50 +0000 UTC]

this is great i just wish i can draw like that but its ok i really liked the storie u should write more and draw more its really great so i hope u make more of these in my dreams i will think of this pic XD lol

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chunkymacaroni In reply to skittlegirl [2007-12-10 02:34:58 +0000 UTC]

ahah, thank you! Actually, my friend wrote the story, I'll be sure to tell her you enjoyed it!

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skittlegirl In reply to chunkymacaroni [2007-12-10 03:20:46 +0000 UTC]

ok but i still like it its really good

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elleblack [2007-12-04 18:29:25 +0000 UTC]

I'm not an "avid" fan of naru/saku but this is really cute and romantic in a sense. Awesome job

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chunkymacaroni In reply to elleblack [2007-12-04 18:49:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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glen-quilat [2007-12-04 08:49:17 +0000 UTC]

nice story to a nice art!!!

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Sakuya-Masamune [2007-11-26 19:01:59 +0000 UTC]

its very beautiful ! good job

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chunkymacaroni In reply to Sakuya-Masamune [2007-11-26 21:41:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Sakuya-Masamune In reply to chunkymacaroni [2007-11-27 18:01:31 +0000 UTC]

no pb

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PaladinArtea [2007-11-16 04:44:59 +0000 UTC]

Very amazing pic and a great story to go with it.

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KataangandZutara [2007-11-12 16:43:33 +0000 UTC]

sha! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Would it be ok if I used this in one of my youtube videos? pleeeeeease! *puppy dog eyes*

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chunkymacaroni In reply to KataangandZutara [2007-11-12 21:32:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Yeah, you can use it.

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MyotaStratus [2007-11-04 23:09:41 +0000 UTC]

So romantic ;_; I love both the picture and the story!!

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chunkymacaroni In reply to MyotaStratus [2007-11-05 00:57:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, and I'll let my friend know you liked it!!

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MyotaStratus In reply to chunkymacaroni [2007-11-05 05:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Cool B) hehe

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afallenangel2010 [2007-10-30 03:01:17 +0000 UTC]

really awsome!!

i like the story it reminds me of me and my boyfriend....he always does that when im mad at him lol

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chunkymacaroni In reply to afallenangel2010 [2007-10-30 13:21:54 +0000 UTC]

ahaha Thanks!

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