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christon-clivef — Ib- Tranquil
Published: 2013-04-25 15:07:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 17427; Favourites: 1218; Downloads: 137
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so another Ib fanart here, this pic is quite big so please Download for bigger size.(i didnt submit the full size here coz maybe i want to use this pic on other place...i dun sure)
i was wondering the tittle... "peace" or "tranquil", or anything else?
and at last.... whatever.
yeah! i wanna make the atmosphere in the horror art museum looks warm and peace...
Mary is with them!! OH MY MARYYYYYY
and no place for headless sis,
poor them.i hope the painting and red-eye dolls doesn't looks too awkward here.
Woah, it is quite a while i didnt draw picture with background (ehm, did I draw before?)
so i wanna try some background.
and of course, i DID take reference from real photos or else i could NEVER draw a background like this, sorry.orz
you can easily find the original pic in google
The background ONLY without characters: [link]
the light and the shadow, it took me really long to figure out how it works and the result is actually not so satisfying for me, anyway i hope you can like the effect here. ;w;
well so.... l-last...! this will be the LAST drawing before i attend my interview...! i really should study for the interview!(though i dunno what to read)
hope i can control my hand for not to draw.
Hope you guys like this!
This is Garry, Ib and Mary from the horror game, Ib.
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Comments: 137
This art is very nice, I like it. it is indeed tranquil, though some points I'd like to add, i would've been better if the scene was outdoors, even in a field near the building they are in. Also it could use a little more detail. I also like the lighting you added very nice. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Another thing is the impact, it doesn't have much impact but in my opinion the tranquility you wanted to show in this artwork is pretty well displayed. Average of 4 stars for me. Good Job and keep it up e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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thank you!!
wow you're really right about this...^^
i know i should improve more!
thank you anyway for the critique!
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your welcome, I make it a point to be honest but not overly discourage the artist
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well this is a wonderfull piece of art... i love the softness of the texture... and many.. more....
and i love the idea about how mary is catching up to them ... and oh... the background.. i love the painting of thee lady in red.. you girlor guy.. (i dont really know your gender) had a vision.. originality, the technique and the impact....
i really love it.. as in i am so speechless......
and the dolls are freaking me a bit and the half manikin is cute though... XD ...
sorry for the small text in this critique cuz.. I still dont have any idea how to do this...
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thank you so much for thinking like this!!QwQ
and yeah i wanna show something that "Mary wants to be with them"!
(and i am a girl lol)
the doll, XD i was not that sure hanging them is a good idea but i dunno where to put them,XD
anyway thank you very much for the critique!QwQ
(though i dun think i deserve that much *o*)
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nah.. you really deserve it
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I haven't played much of Ib but I've watched a play through. I love how Mary is trying to catch up to Gary and Ib. This piece makes me wonder how these 3 would get along if they were able to be friends in the real world. In short I like how your vision is tied in with the theme of the game.
Although the way you presented this piece isn't groundbreaking the way you have Mary in the background is something I don't see in a lot of fan art. Cause it's mostly just GaryxIb. So I'm happy to see she got some exposure here.
As an art piece this is beautiful. There is a reason why you have so many watchers but your colouring style is just so ***king nice to look at! I love how soft the colours are and how they blend so well with each other. E.g. On Ib's Skirt you can see the different shades of red but flow so well because of your understanding of light. The drawing is absolutely top notch. In the right side of this piece the floor is transparent which gives the illusion of a reflection. I don't know if you did it that way but it looks really nice. Another thing I have to compliment in this tremendously long paragraph is your attention to detail. At the back of the hallway I can see some sort of figure. One thing I do when I look at people's character designs is their feet. THEN there's underneath the feet where I can see a shadowed reflection of the two characters. Your dedication to detail is so heart wrenching because I can't imagine how many people may have looked at this piece and not realize it. if you ever work on a game/comic make a journal because I would love to see your work.
As a art piece in general I feel some artistic intention. Although the highlight of this piece is the resonating colours I really like how Mary is in the background trying to catch up to Gary and Ib. I know I mention it a lot but the fact that both of them aren't even looking at Mary makes me feel really sad for her. Why I'm not giving it a 5 star is because I am distracted by the red on the bottom left and some table bottom right. I don't know why its there but it kinda takes my eye away from the greatness that is your art piece which reduces the impact of your piece.
Sorry for writing so much but I believe that something that you spent so much time doing should only be responded with a critique with as much insight as possible and I hope I provided that proper insight. If not Sh*t sorry <(|~|)> Please keep producing more eye candy! And thanks for reading!
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Your absolutely welcome, to be honest at the time I was writing the piece and critiquing it made me feel better (not to be a sadist <(>~<)>) but when I do something for people I feel better. I forgot to mention that dammit. But Thank you and keep drawing!
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wow, really, first i want to thank you for writing a critique for my art.
yeah in the game i always though three of them should be together, though i love garryxIb too.^^
and thank you so much for loving my coloring! i'm so appreciate with it.QwQ
about the blending of the color i think i should improve more but still thank you so much.
haha and the reflection of their feet etc, i'm glad someone noticed it, xD
i wanna give a shadow feels and that actually makes me headache on how to do it nicely.
yeah and they dont look at Mary at there, i believe when they know Mary is calling for them, they'll stop and grabs Mary's hand, and walk together.^^
(well actually it is just because i dunno how to make them notice Mary, xD)
haha and the red in bottom left! i wanna make it a skirt figure of Headless Sis but i failed, the image is too blur and cant define it, orz haha, sorry for that, still need to improve more to make it better.
anyway i'm really grateful to you, thank you so much for writing critique for my art piece and thank you so much for loving it!
and yeah i think i'll produce more Ib fanart, xD
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haha old art, took reference for the bg and thank you!!
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thank you so much for all your comments!
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Awww no problem,it's my pleasure!
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Ib really is a great game, I downloaded it recently. Fantastic work on this piece!
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thank you for loving this pic!
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thank you!! Mary is trying to catch up.XD
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I really love the lighting on this.
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Man, I can't seem to click on your username to watch you. When I do, it gives me a warning and tells me it's a virus? What? :c I wanna watch you D:
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wow why things like that? O_O
i dun really know what's going on.
does anyone face the same problem?
anyway thank you for the watch even though you cannot watch me!;w;
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Well, it finally is giving me an option to proceed to your user and click watch, so yay! XD
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THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!XD
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YOU ARE VERY WELCOME~!
xD AND THANK YOU FOR DOING BEAUTIFUL PIECES OF ART~!
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thank you!!
and thank you for all the comments too!
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I love the atmosphere..~
Even if you're not satisfied with the light and shadows, It looks beautiful to me :3 I always have problems with light, I'm also never happy with them because some parts seem unrealistic, but sometimes it still looks pretty so it doesn't stand out too much... :3 Like in this picture, it really doesn't matter if a few parts may not be perfect... ~ :3 (I'm just saying this because YOU weren't too happy with it, I think it's simply great~)
I also love how much detail you added~ :3 I almost didn't recognize the headless statues in the background :3 And there's still more to see :3
Great fanart, I really like it and you're awesome~ X3 ♥
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thank you so much!!QwQQ
well i really should improve more in my coloring....QwQ
hehe headless sis!XD they're like guarding and standing at the side of the corridor.XD
thank you again!!
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I think your coloring is awesome! xD But I know, as artist I'm also never satisfied with my skills QwQ
I kinda like the headless statues .. :3 They're pretty xD
You're very welcome ;3
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wow thank you so much for thinking like that...QwQ
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This looks amazing! I especially love the scary dolls hanging from the ceiling!
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thank you!!QwQ
haha i hope they're not too awkward to hang at there.>w<;
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I love the "haziness" of it. It does look more peaceful than the game actually is.
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i should improve more on the bluring effect, >_<
thank you btw!
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