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Description WAII!!!! I finished the first page of my D.N.Angel Doujinshi!!!
(MIGHT CHANGE DOUJINSHI TITLE LATER DX)

For those that may not kno, I decided that since i couldn't find many D.N.Angel doujinshies I'd make one of my own :awW:

Here's a quick summary of my doujinshi's plot::


"This doujinshi starts off at the end of the series.
Dark Mousy, Daisuke’s companion and close friend is moments away from being sealed away for an eternity.

Daisuke Niwa being the kind hearted person that he is, can’t stand the fact that his best friend has to be sealed away like this, and so in the end, he gives up his very own flesh and blood so that Dark Mousy may finally know what it's like to live. He'd rather see his friend happy, than to live his whole life "wasting his life" or so he sees it....

Dark being the stubborn person that he is, is extremely angry at the fact that Daisuke would be selfish enough to give up his own life for him when Dark feels that he doesn't deserve it after all that he's done to him. And so he tries to end the very life he was given. But after talking to Emiko and others, he changes his mind set and starts to search for a way to bring Daisuke back, whether it means that he has to disappear forever or not."

And here's a quick summary of wuts goin on in this page if you're having trouble understanding it... ^___^

Dark is just moments from being sealed away, but Daisuke Niwa decides that he will not allow his friend to be taken this way.
And so he uses his blood to activate a spell using the
"Blood Onyx Maiden"
(which is the little statue in the 4th panel XDD)
to end his life and give his flesh and blood so that Dark's spirit may finally have a body.

Well I hope everyone likes it ^__^ I have NO EXPERIENCE wutsoever in creating mangas and using manga tones and such so I kno it's not the best >//////////<
Please no critics on that!!
Tell me wut u think of the first page Shoud I keep going??



D.N.Angel/Characters ©: Yukiru Sugisaki
Doujinshi/Fan art ©: Me =ChiquitaElena
TOOLS: .07 Lead Pencil= Sketch/Dark's hair : Photoshop CS=Skin tones and text
TIME:1 week
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Comments: 186

AnimeCuteCake [2014-10-26 02:32:34 +0000 UTC]

PAGE 1 OR THE NEXT ONE! NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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LightLatias [2012-10-28 18:08:08 +0000 UTC]

*Takes up a whip* More.. pages.. now.. D< it's looks too good to not be continued! >w<

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KentraSnow [2012-05-14 23:36:57 +0000 UTC]

*drags Daisuke away and slits un-named singing bastard's wrist* Stupid! You have to do this right! Use someone completely useless! That way, we don't lose anyone, and we get Dark.

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TwilightAngelKey [2012-04-28 00:45:56 +0000 UTC]

mmmmm DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII-CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNN THAT'S SO SAD

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BloodyRiP [2010-12-29 04:43:06 +0000 UTC]

WHY IT THERE NO MORE PAGES!!!!!!!!!

finish plz
or....
I WILL KILL YOU!

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MistoftheDawn [2010-12-19 17:23:52 +0000 UTC]

Total Awesomness! Please continue this?

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shuika [2010-11-02 10:06:32 +0000 UTC]

cool... I would LOVE too read some more... Please contunie this manga

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FlurryDancer [2010-01-25 06:09:40 +0000 UTC]

i like it a lot u did a good job

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Dark-Daisuke-Club [2009-11-03 20:57:07 +0000 UTC]

This is mucho amazing. ;3

Faved, deffinetly! ;D

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CuttingOutTheLight [2009-10-29 07:02:48 +0000 UTC]

Yes yes keep it up

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it-princess [2009-06-21 04:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Definetly freakin' awesome! please say that u'll continue this. I the effort.

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nightangel93 [2009-06-03 02:15:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow its soo cool i wanna read more

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TotallyCRAZYandHyper [2009-05-08 00:11:53 +0000 UTC]

i don't have many words to use, but Cool. I am a suker 4 stuff like that. ^^ i dont know why. lol, anywuggles that amazeing!

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RainbowBublTape [2009-01-06 14:17:17 +0000 UTC]

i love it hope you continue it! ^__^

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Nekothedeviant [2008-10-02 12:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yeah, you should keep going! ^_^
I love it!

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IlluminaughtyCipher [2008-05-29 15:41:09 +0000 UTC]

kawaii! so cool! and here i thought that the DNAngel comics ended lmao no seriously you could be the actual artist of DNAnge and i think youd do well doing your own manga

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CBCat [2008-05-02 19:30:52 +0000 UTC]

OMG!!! This shows a different type of friendship!!

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Dark-Evray [2008-04-15 05:06:21 +0000 UTC]

OMG this is terrific! It looks just like a real manga! You should definetly continue this! Don't drop it, whatever you do!

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pookena [2008-03-20 02:50:48 +0000 UTC]

looks like actual manga so much it is amazing! the 1st page to my story doesnt looks half as good amazing work!!

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raichusplace [2008-02-26 00:13:10 +0000 UTC]

please contiune i love it!

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raichusplace [2008-02-26 00:10:58 +0000 UTC]

so good i love it i wish i was that good.

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halloweennight [2008-01-13 05:43:27 +0000 UTC]

awesome do continue

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equinnoxious [2008-01-08 13:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Ooo... Finally something DNAngelish... favin!

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Chibi-Yukiko-chan [2007-12-27 15:00:25 +0000 UTC]

O_O awesome
can`t wait to see more =3

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HakuryuMyuu [2007-12-08 02:21:03 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Please keep it going! *wants to read more*

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Kiskameliska [2007-11-23 02:43:43 +0000 UTC]

It looks like it could be in a real manga book! x3
You should deffinetly continue it. I really wanna see what happens next. ^^

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Naruto-girl1 [2007-11-21 02:40:19 +0000 UTC]

yes you should please!!! wow, i haven't been on in a long time. I think i've been longer away from deviantart than u.

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sakura2133 [2007-11-18 06:59:26 +0000 UTC]

OMG! I REALLY WANT TO READ THE REST!!

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Kai-dono [2007-08-17 14:07:10 +0000 UTC]

You caould draw DN angel characters really good! I envy youuu! >_<

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dark-mousy-chan [2007-08-17 03:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait for the next page! Hurry xD

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shaymayca1 [2007-06-27 19:21:38 +0000 UTC]

keep going !!! I wanna know what happens!

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renKa002 [2007-05-26 07:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Just awesome! I love what you did to Dark and Daisuke
Is there a 2nd page?

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BloomBlitz [2007-05-07 17:18:48 +0000 UTC]

Finally! I hope this ending is better than the anime one. Sacrificing themselves to save eachother reminds me alot of the last epiosde of FMA. However, this is great-looking and has an excellent ploe behind it. I look forward to seeing the next page. Great job!

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CyberHughostclub [2007-05-02 16:08:23 +0000 UTC]

i wanna noe what happens next !!

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lharvey1515 [2007-05-02 00:46:20 +0000 UTC]

oh-wow ^_^ i really like this, it looks very nice.

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RyuukaTamura [2007-04-29 02:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Awesomeness! It's your manga's fault I'm stealing my friend's word!!! (couldn't think of anything else to use) for a second I actually thought that you used a page of the manga and put in different words, but then I realized that I've never seen anything like it before. Also no offense but I think Dark looks a tiny bit younger than he did in Sugisaki-sama's version. Of course, at least you can tell who it is unlike how I draw... (personally I can't even make the same person I created look like that same person again, so I admire your ability to copy Sugisaki-sama's style like that.) Whoa that was longer than I intended...

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tutic [2007-04-24 04:21:52 +0000 UTC]

aaaaa!!!!! ke bellezaaa!! eso lo hiciste tu!!?? juralo!! yo kero ser mangaka pero tu me dejas chico ahaha me encanta dnangel de hecho es mi serie favorita la vi como 4 veces daisuke es un amooor... me gusta satoshi es tan serio y kawaii

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ChiquitaElena In reply to tutic [2007-04-25 01:09:33 +0000 UTC]

Ja ja lo juro!!! Por supuesto que lo hice! Quien mas lo podria hacer??

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SlothGirl [2007-04-15 14:29:09 +0000 UTC]

Wow, really amazing frist page. x3

I love the style, looks so similar to the DNAngel artists.

Dark looks so cool, I love the detail in the hair.
Poor little Daisuke. T.T

The story sounds so interesting. I hope to see more soon. ^^

Really nice work.

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theunknown1 [2007-04-14 10:01:25 +0000 UTC]

Wow !! Not bad at ALL, especially for a first time ! I hope you don't mind me saying this one thing about it that has nothing to do with your drawing: The font for Dark's words seems slightly too fancy (it's sometimes hard to read until you fullview it). Otherwise, it's perfect - great story idea as well ^__^!!!

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Sikurri [2007-04-11 02:01:10 +0000 UTC]

AHH~ Darkkk @___@||| <3333
You draw them so welll and it looks like a real manga too!?!! >:0 Grr~!

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ChiquitaElena In reply to Sikurri [2007-04-11 02:03:55 +0000 UTC]

CHUU!!!! YOu thinkies so???? >3<~~!!! Waii thank you hun! So good to be able to read ur sweet comments again!! We have a lot of catchin up to do!!

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Sikurri In reply to ChiquitaElena [2007-04-11 02:19:48 +0000 UTC]

Definitellyyy <3
I think so on both thinngss xDDD <3
>:3 PROPS TO CATCHING UPNESS <3

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CoolAngel [2007-04-07 11:40:54 +0000 UTC]

awsome!!

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CITRUSLOVE [2007-04-06 05:09:21 +0000 UTC]

omgod, wow, I WANT TO READ MORE!!! >o👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Merollet [2007-04-04 18:53:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh my, it's like reading the actual manga <3
Not just the style, but the overall atmosphere is like the original manga! You're a great mangaka, dear!
I like the expressions too ^^ they're actually really hard to make.. ne? ^^"
You can tone manga with the pattern stamp tool in photshop. or did you make it with that? It looks nice nonetheless ^^"

I really wanna see the next pages

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Souls-0f-Art [2007-04-04 06:14:31 +0000 UTC]

this is greeeeattt. starting your own manga=you're a genius xD
!
amazing work~

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Sensei-D [2007-03-30 15:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh, Dark is hawt. This is really good. What materials did you use for this?

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ChiquitaElena In reply to Sensei-D [2007-04-02 01:28:48 +0000 UTC]

All of the materials i used are stated in the description

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AsakuraMei [2007-03-29 12:49:05 +0000 UTC]

Waiiii Martha-chan's drawing skillz are so amazing XD Teach meeeee! XDD And you say you can't draw without refs. LIAH! |D

I misses youuuuu~ My computer died T.T I can only be online at school and the public library (which I never get to cuz I have to work...) Anyway, I'll be looking out for more of this cuz it sound exciting!! *goes off to draw DNAngel character*

I hope i get to talk to you again soon! ><
Luffles, Mei-chan

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