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    “Flyspurrr!”  Rover’s booming voice thundered through the hollow cavern, bouncing off the blue walls and coming back to him in a shower of tinny echoes.  Several large icicles broke loose from the domed ceiling and shattered into millions of sparkling pieces as they crashed into the cave floor.

    There was a startled squawk as Dr. Cloud Featherstone narrowly missed being skewered by one of the errant stalactites.  He shook himself, forcing his ruffled feathers to smooth back down.  “Perhaps we should keep it down.”  He suggested, just loud enough so the starship captain could hear him from the other side of the cavern.  “We can hardly continue our search if we get ourselves impaled.”

    “Keep lookin’!”  Rover called back, ignoring the warning.  “He’s around here, someplace.”  He cupped both hands around his mouth and called again, and once more only echoes replied.  “Come on, Blue.”  He whispered harshly, his breath coming out in puffs of misty ice crystals.  “Why in the starry cosmopolitan won’t you answer?”

    Diffused light filtered in through tons of ancient ice giving the cavern an eerie blue glow and making everything seem even colder than it actually was.  The temperature was just pushing 12 degrees, a virtual heat wave on a planet where the climate rarely climbed above zero.  Rover, of course, didn’t feel the cold with his PEG (Personal Environment Generator) clipped tightly to his belt, keeping everything within the skin-tight forcefield a comfortable 72.  The moment they had landed on this planet Flyspur had insisted on thoroughly checking everyone’s PEG before they stepped out onto the frigid planet.  Some of them hadn’t been up to his standards and he had spent nearly half an hour tinkering with the little devices before he deemed them ready for use.  As much as Rover liked his first mate Flyspur could be annoyingly persnickety at times.

    This Class EC (or Extra Cold) Planet wasn’t exactly anyone’s first choice for a vacation spot but their sensors had picked up traces of fissionstone, a rare mineral capable of storing enough power to run a starship for years, a handy thing to have on board if they could rig up a converter.  And Rover wasn’t about to pass up an opportunity to do a little mining even if the weather was a bit chilly.

    They hadn’t pulled their mining tools out right away, of course.  One of the crew had never seen snow before and most of them were only passingly familiar with it so the first steps onto this new planet had resulted in a full blown snowball battle.  With his four arms Flyspur had had an unfair advantage, or so Dr. Featherstone commented when he had his glasses knocked off. 

    After perhaps a good deal of fun Rover pulled out the scanner and they headed off in the direction of the fissionstone readings.  The device had lead the small band across the barren, white terrain and into a large hole in the side of a glacier.  The cavern was enormous, but even so it wasn’t long before they found the source of the fissionstone readings.  Unfortunately it had turned out the stone was not naturally occurring.  In scattered behind one icy wall of the cave were the broken remains of a starship.  It must have crashed decades, if not millennia ago, and the bits of fissionstone from it’s shattered engine still glowed with enough power to be read on sensors. 

    They had just been discussing if they should melt the walls -even if they hadn’t hit the motherload those small pieces were still valuable- when a thunderous roar shook the cavern.

    The creature towered above them, huge jaws agape, snarling and angry, with paws the size of trash can covers and twin tails swirling about it like bullwhips.  Where it had come from they hadn’t a clue but it only took one look at the behemoth to send the entire expedition packing.

    How they had managed to stay ahead of the beast he would never know but it chased them out of the cave and for some distance beyond before Rover managed to coax the blowtorch attachment from his left arm.  Thankfully, despite it’s great size and strength, the creature was terrified of the heat and high-tailed it out of there right quick. 

    It was only then, when they didn’t hear Flyspur’s voice asking: “Is everyone here?  Is everyone okay?” that they realized he was not with them.  And he was not answering his communicator.

    They had quickly split up with Rover and the Doc taking inside the cave and the rest searching outside. 

    Rover swallowed the inexplicable lump in his throat.  There was a perfectly good reason he wasn’t answering.  He just got turned around a bit is all, or maybe he got tuckered out after all the excitement and was…taking a nap.  Sure.  Perfectly reasonable.  He was just beginning to believe that when a splash of bright yellow caught his eye.  Flyspur’s coat!

    He was there in a second.

    The Jssfloon’s thin form was curled into a tight ball with his knees to his chin and his small brushy tail curled around his ankles.

    “Fer the sake of Roy Rogers, Blue!  We’ve been callin’ you for half an hour!”

    But Flyspur’s eyes were closed and he still didn’t answer. 

    “Hey…”  Rover’s voice softened.  “You alright?”  He put a hand on his friend’s shoulder to shake him but he quickly jerked his hand back as if he had been burned.  He was cold…and stiff.  Only now did Rover notice the frost on Flyspur’s clothes and the way his blue skin sparkled faintly in the muted light.  And then he saw why.  The PEG system was still clipped to his belt but the screen was shattered and the side cracked open. 

    Rover felt as if his had stopped working as well because he suddenly felt cold all over.  “DOC!”  He cried at the top of his voice.  “Doc!  Over here!”

    Doctor Cloud was at his side in seconds.  “Oh…oh dear.”  He adjusted the small round spectacles that sat astride his beak.  What appeared to be a pair of wire-rimmed glasses were actually a highly sophisticated diagnostic instrument. 

    “He’s…He’s alright.”  Rover asked. 

    “No.”  The doctor closed his eyes and let out a defeated sigh.  “He’s frozen…solid.”    

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I actually hadn't intended this to be a story.  I did the previous picture because there was this crazy cold front and I just couldn't keep me warm enough, and my feet were freezing and the picture kind of came from that.  Then...well, I just couldn't leave it at that.  From the pic came a story and this is just the second part.  (this would have been a full blown story but I only have four of the characters worked out so for now it's going to be in three vingettes)


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CyborgPhoenix [2019-06-07 04:41:44 +0000 UTC]

*Vibrating the scales on her tale in an attempt to stave off her instinct to curl up and rest. The sound of which is like a rattlesnake on steroids* "What? Don't  look at me like that.   I'm a reptile,  and I'm cold."

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aileiltaliesin [2018-03-10 03:31:47 +0000 UTC]

One thing you can do with sci-fi: take things that mean certain doom to normal people with ordinary technology and make them cliff-hangers where it honestly could go either way. Flyspur looks miserably unwell (which I guess is only to be expected from a person who has frozen solid, but still, poor fellow). It's good he's got the others looking out for him (and Rover looks so scared). Also, I only just now noticed how truly impressive Rover's eyebrows are: those are remarkable.

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chill13 In reply to aileiltaliesin [2018-03-10 17:50:16 +0000 UTC]

Very true! One thing I like about the genre.

Yeah, not Flyspur's best moment. He is not doing well at all.

Ha ha. Rover really does have some crazy thick eyebrows. He could probably win some sort of contest.

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ZackWriter23 [2016-06-07 05:22:13 +0000 UTC]

one sec.*takes out a Lightsaber and cuts open a Tauntaun* that should keep him warm.^^ until Rover gets shelter up.

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WorldBuildersInc [2015-01-29 22:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Lol I'm weird to laugh at something like this but now Flyspur really lives up to his nickname: blue!

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chill13 In reply to WorldBuildersInc [2015-01-29 22:41:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes.  He is very blue, here.  More so than usual.   Although, I don't imagine Rover thinks it's very funny.

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NovaReliquae [2014-07-13 02:31:44 +0000 UTC]

I really like what you write and draw with those two interesting characters of yours! keep it up, I'm excited to read more of their adventures!

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chill13 In reply to NovaReliquae [2014-07-13 02:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow!  Thank you so much!  That means a lot!  I'm having quite a bit of fun with these two and the rest of the crew as well.  I'm hoping to eventually write an honest to goodness book about them.  But as it is right now I'm just trying to work on them in general.  

Here's a short two-part story about Rover and Flyspur, if you're interested.  chill13.deviantart.com/art/The…

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NovaReliquae In reply to chill13 [2014-07-14 02:17:53 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! And they do seem to be so much fun indeed! I know the fun you have with your character, it's just that sometimes I'm kinda shy or discouraged to share all of them xD 
And yep that would be so awesome, I would totally read it! :3 And working on your characters so that you know them more helps a bunch ^^ I'm hoping to start a comic since I'm so bad at writing xD 

And I did read that one, too! I liked it as well :3

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chill13 In reply to NovaReliquae [2014-07-14 18:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Comic strips are a lot of fun!  Always glad to see people getting into that kind of art!  I hope it works out for you.

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NovaReliquae In reply to chill13 [2014-07-19 01:24:28 +0000 UTC]

They are indeed, I just become such a perfectionist I hate doing them and keep delaying them until I maybe get better?  
Thanks! I hope so too :3

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Oida2CATDOODLE [2014-01-19 03:40:24 +0000 UTC]

It reminds me when (in Disney Frozen) Anna's heart were frozen because Elsa accidentally hit her...

And Kristoff rescued her in the middle of a blizzard or something...

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chill13 In reply to Oida2CATDOODLE [2014-01-19 03:52:43 +0000 UTC]

I realized that after I found out a little about that movie.  But I swear I did this before I even heard of 'Frozen'.  A little different, though.  Rover didn't freeze him, nor did the ice creature...it was just a cold planet and his protection busted.

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Oida2CATDOODLE In reply to chill13 [2014-01-19 03:58:49 +0000 UTC]

hehe...it was twisted a little bit but its COOL!



(ps you swore?)

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chill13 In reply to Oida2CATDOODLE [2014-01-19 04:19:53 +0000 UTC]

LOL!  'Swear' as in promise.  Not 'swear' as in cussing or using bad language.

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Oida2CATDOODLE In reply to chill13 [2014-01-19 10:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Sorry I misunderstood you!

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chill13 In reply to Oida2CATDOODLE [2014-01-19 15:38:08 +0000 UTC]

It's okay

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daisybtoes [2014-01-02 06:20:54 +0000 UTC]

There you are!  I've been wondering where you'd been since I haven't heard much rom you since Thanksgiving.  Your cyborg cowboy (whose name I forget) is working on this little blue bundle of frozen cuteness.  I will be looking forward to see what else you're doing with him, and also looking forward to more of your G&S work as well.  Who is the little blue fella, anyway?

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chill13 In reply to daisybtoes [2014-01-02 06:51:21 +0000 UTC]

Here I am!  


Yeah, Rover (cyborg cowboy) is pretty worried about now.  Little Blue, is Flyspur, his first mate and oldest friend.  And right now he's little more than a hunk of ice.  

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NeycuuRose1 [2013-12-29 22:02:24 +0000 UTC]

and also decent

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NeycuuRose1 [2013-12-29 22:02:15 +0000 UTC]

this is very nice

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chill13 In reply to NeycuuRose1 [2013-12-29 22:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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NeycuuRose1 In reply to chill13 [2013-12-29 22:13:17 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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chill13 In reply to NeycuuRose1 [2013-12-29 22:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Just now finished the next part: chill13.deviantart.com/art/War…

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NeycuuRose1 In reply to chill13 [2013-12-29 22:15:32 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME!

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AlexVanArsdale [2013-12-26 02:34:47 +0000 UTC]

Maybe he can shut down his body like a lizard and as soon as he warms up he'll be fine!  


If not then.  

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chill13 In reply to AlexVanArsdale [2013-12-26 18:23:19 +0000 UTC]

That would be a handy survival mechinism. 

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WindyMountain5090 [2013-12-25 16:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Do you you draw these things by hand or do you use a computer and mouse? Your work is extremely detailed and consistant, the colors are spot on, and your story telling skills are just as good. I admire your talent a lot!

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chill13 In reply to WindyMountain5090 [2013-12-25 18:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Most of my work is a combination of both.  I'll sketch it out on paper, scan it in and then color it on the computer.


Aww.  Thank you so much!

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LabelPerginu [2013-12-25 15:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh no! D: Poor Flyspur! The picture and the story, both wonderful yet intense o.o 

A great job, as always, dude. I hope Flyspur will be alright :'/ And I'd love to see this Dr. Cloud Featherstone :3

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chill13 In reply to LabelPerginu [2013-12-25 19:29:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he's certainly not well.  He's little more than a hunk of ice right now.


I shoukd have some pictures of the Doc up pretty soon.  I've got his general designdown but color schemes elude me.   Gonna go look at some birds.

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LabelPerginu In reply to chill13 [2013-12-26 02:55:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh aye, I can see that :/ 


Cool, I love nerd birds :3

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chill13 In reply to LabelPerginu [2013-12-26 03:05:44 +0000 UTC]

Lol!  Nerd bird fit's him perfectly.  He's both a physician and a xenobiologist and a bit of an absent-minded professor.  He also likes to lecture.

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LabelPerginu In reply to chill13 [2013-12-26 03:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Aww heheh X"D Ahhh interesting. I can't wait to see his final look :3 

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LaDeary [2013-12-25 14:05:26 +0000 UTC]

Flyspur, NOOO!

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chill13 In reply to LaDeary [2013-12-25 18:22:37 +0000 UTC]

Popcicle.  

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LaDeary In reply to chill13 [2013-12-25 18:52:52 +0000 UTC]

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UniversesCollideInc [2013-12-25 11:31:04 +0000 UTC]

Poor Flyspur! Is he gonna be okay?...what am I saying?! You can't come away from being frozen solid without some damage!

On another note, I like Dr. Featherstone already and can't wait to see his pic.

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chill13 In reply to UniversesCollideInc [2013-12-25 18:34:41 +0000 UTC]

That's a good question..He's certainly not doing well now.


I'll have some pics of the Doc up soon.  I have his general design down pretty well but i'm hung up on a color scheme.

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UniversesCollideInc In reply to chill13 [2013-12-25 19:52:58 +0000 UTC]

Maybe white and tan? White's associated with healing and tan's an earthy tone.

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JaggidArt [2013-12-25 10:07:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh...my god...the emotion...suspense....very well written, I've always admired your ability to paint such a picture. What a way to end, what are you doing to us!!!

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chill13 In reply to JaggidArt [2013-12-25 19:31:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, sorry.  A bit of a cliffhanger, there wasnt it?

Aww.  Thanks.  I just like to write.  Glad you're enjoying.

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JaggidArt In reply to chill13 [2013-12-27 09:45:23 +0000 UTC]

I'm hoping it's some ancient buried instinct of his species to freeze oneself, like plants or insects.


No prob! I can tell you enjoy it, it really comes through

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