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Published: 2006-08-11 15:49:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description OMG IT'S HERE! O____O Finally, right?

And this is how bad Chesh sucks at comics. T____T

Okay, so, like any other first page of manga, there's hardly any talking, there's random shots of everybody, nothing is explained, people murmur little things like "Hm?" and you can a snapshot of one of the main characters butt as she looks at the other main character.

I'd explain why she's at the airport, and why Hogo is getting off the plain, and why they're look like they don't know each other (which they don't yet), but I'd rather make you wait until the next page. I should probably get a chapter page and a title page done first though. ^^'

So that's Anna in the 1st, 4th, and 5th pannel if you can't tell. I know, she looks a lot different from the original picture I put up of her. And at the bottom, that's Hogo. I've never put him up here even though he's the main character. I guess I've just never had a good picture of him. ^^' And on the second panel that's just a hot stuartess. Yup, gotta have one of those. ^^ I don't like that background on the main shot at the bottom. If you can't tell, that's one of those luggage revolver things in the background. And just pretend that's a very icolated part of the Vancouver airport; most of the lights there are all abstract and hang from the roof in random angles.

Everything Roki Valley (c) me 2006-2007, of forever. ^^
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Comments: 15

phoenixblessed [2006-09-09 18:49:02 +0000 UTC]

NO!

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cheshirecatdude In reply to phoenixblessed [2006-09-10 02:47:27 +0000 UTC]

XDDD I'll probably just edit it up a bit. No worries. I don't want to go through the trouble of drawing that door an extra time. *has ruler handicappiness*

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phoenixblessed [2006-09-09 00:48:30 +0000 UTC]

hurry upo

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cheshirecatdude In reply to phoenixblessed [2006-09-09 04:29:58 +0000 UTC]

omg... I might have to redo this page XD

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Kinuyasha [2006-08-12 00:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Looks good!
[Hogo's arm looks slightly funky.....and in the stuartess' speech bubble you spelt vancouver wrong]

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cheshirecatdude In reply to Kinuyasha [2006-08-12 17:00:48 +0000 UTC]

XDDDDDDDD No surprise there

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shylittleghost [2006-08-11 18:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Don't kid yourself Ches-this is awsome! Very proffesional-like to =3

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cheshirecatdude In reply to shylittleghost [2006-08-11 20:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^ I appreciate it.

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RedRider333 [2006-08-11 17:30:12 +0000 UTC]

All this and you're actually gonna make us wait for more? T_T You torture me, Chessy-chan.

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cheshirecatdude In reply to RedRider333 [2006-08-11 18:02:59 +0000 UTC]

pffff. Like it makes a difference. I drew up Anna in Fighter Form, but I killed it, so I'll need to draw something else for the chapter page.

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Lifes-Light [2006-08-11 16:37:32 +0000 UTC]

Awesome first page. It looks like you spend so much time on your pages! >_<

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cheshirecatdude In reply to Lifes-Light [2006-08-11 18:01:41 +0000 UTC]

Nahh, not really. Just the background on the last panel, even though it's so lame. >___<;;;

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Cursie [2006-08-11 16:01:56 +0000 UTC]

so far so good
*waits for more pages*

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cheshirecatdude In reply to Cursie [2006-08-11 16:03:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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Cursie In reply to cheshirecatdude [2006-08-11 16:06:56 +0000 UTC]

very welcome

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