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Cherry-Chocoalate — Im Here - I Love You
Published: 2014-01-29 04:12:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 409; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 1
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This is mainly for my boyfriend, but I want this to be for all my Berries too!♥ I really do love you guys even if I tend to get disappointed or quiet on DA. Thanks for supporting me and my art and I hope this new shading first style looks visually better and I can try harder in my future works!♥
With critique do not take the background into conderation please; I worked on the body for quite a few hours and tried to shade before I colored to put more effort into it.
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I really think this piece is wonderful. It's always a joy to see something from you as a lot of the work you put out is wonderful, and the pieces you put a lot of effort into are always, always, always amazing. This whole picture is amazing and I really can't find much I'd say 'improve on'. As far as I'm concerned, the only thing that sticks out for me is that her face is looking at you straight on but when it comes to the mane at her back, it's angled to our right, inconsistent with how we view the face. This is a very small thing and I'm just nitpicking but if you want critique then that's what I'll give. Also, the structure of her face could be worked on a little. That isn't to say her face isn't stunning, it's just more of a personal preference. For example, when it comes to chins, even though wolves (and most mammals) are furry creatures, I wouldn't add chin fluff unless it's a male, much like a goatee. The extra scruff gives off a feel of disarray and boyishness, something a lot of male Disney characters have, for example, Simba's head tuft and Nalas lack of such.
Over all, this is a very nice piece and I think my favorite part is the detail you put into the shirt and jeans and your amazing job at the hands. You've really outdone yourself here and I wish you would keep coming with things like this.
Keep at it.
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Thank you so much for such positive feed back!♥ I remember when I finished lining and I decided to change the way I color and shaded I was scared to work so hard and let myself get disappointed over not many views or feedback. I know I shouldn't act that way, but I'm very interested in what others have to say on this site.
With the regards to her mane, I do realize this but I really enjoy drawing it and letting it be exposed. I do think about drawing very hidden pieces that could stick out on each sides of her neck, but I just like her hair too much to try <:. Thanks for that tho♥
The small patch of fur on her chin is something I draw on all my wolves, felines, and other types of furry animals. I don't like the look or feel of a "naked" or smooth chin, just how I draw all the wolf tails pointed at the end when thats not realistic. I just enjoy it <:. I AM working on showing more gender in my bodies, I have eyelashes for a start xD haha. I sometimes draw noses differently by gender, and spine/back too. Neck fur also. But anyways, I understand it's just what you think and I really appreciate it! It's nice to have such a long reply from something I worked hard on. Thank you so much for the lovely comments to, it really helps me into trying more and not giving up my art :"D ♥.
Psssssh garrl, I LOVE fashion, I love drawing detail in clothes! eve I am just lazy when it comes to shading xD. But I shade first now, THEN color so hopefully that will make my work look better now <: Thanks again♥♥
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