Comments: 16
liyaperfidious [2014-07-31 12:17:06 +0000 UTC]
Dude, this is really fabulous. You're getting better at this.
For critique...
Try showing the side of the forehead by making it a bit darker, otherwise it'd look a bit flat.
And the chin and mouth area could be shown as two separate parts even more.
Like... making the shaded area between the lips "sharper" and less blurry.
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Cheapcookie In reply to liyaperfidious [2014-08-03 19:51:12 +0000 UTC]
Oh!thank you!
you're so right about his forehead! i will really think about that the next time!
Oh the chin and the mouth ?Sharper..hmm! Nice idea too!
I'm still really new at this then i'm really clumsy and do sooo many mistakes! However, thank you again for have pointed out these mistakes!
i'll try my best for the next one! I think i'm gonna do more of these!
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liyaperfidious In reply to Cheapcookie [2014-08-05 07:31:09 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
Yeeeey I look forward to them all!
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The-Raven-Soul [2014-07-26 20:18:25 +0000 UTC]
Did you just say you're BAD at this kind of drawing?! LIES, ALL LIES, I WILL HEAR NO MORE OF THIS! YOU ARE FANTASTIC AT THIS! YOU HAVE SUCH A CUTE UNIQUE STYLE AND THEN BAM TURNS OUT YOU'RE ALSO SKILLED IN SEMI-REALISM! YOUR TALENT HURTS TO BEHOLD IN THE BEST WAY POSSIBLE!
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Cheapcookie In reply to The-Raven-Soul [2014-08-03 19:52:58 +0000 UTC]
dfqsudklf thank you so much fqsf i don't know what to say! t-thank you !
I think i'm just not used to semi realism, i should maybe work more on that...
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hauntingsilver [2014-07-26 09:02:21 +0000 UTC]
omg all these peeps giving detailed critiques and the only thing im able to think is 'holy shit that's fantastic'! But seriously, Miss Cookie, this is awesome!
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Cheapcookie In reply to hauntingsilver [2014-08-03 19:53:41 +0000 UTC]
XDD thank youuu!you don't have to say anything!
i'm really glad to see you like it !
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Vicxtor [2014-07-25 16:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Incredibly excellent.
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Reikiwie [2014-07-25 16:41:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh god c'est tellement
WOAUH
J'serais aboslument pas capable de faire un truc pareil perso
FRANCHEMENT CHAPEAU TOTAL
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Cheapcookie In reply to Reikiwie [2014-08-03 19:56:43 +0000 UTC]
hlkgdbs Sisi tu peux le faire. Ce que je fais c'est foireux. En plus,c'est pas du TOUT mon style e semi realiste . Alors si j'y arrive, t'es bien obligé d'y passer un jour toi aussi!et jsuis sure que ça va gerer! essaye! ça fait bien travailler en tout cas!
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Cheapcookie In reply to Vhestale [2014-08-03 19:58:21 +0000 UTC]
ooh merci mercii!
Un joli mélange uhuhu quel beau compliment!
Oh la palette, c'est tellement RARE que je travail avec des couleurs sombre... ;y; Au moins ça me fait changer un peu!!
en tout cas merci beaucoup!
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Aricchin [2014-07-25 12:08:34 +0000 UTC]
I was going to write a critique but I've never made one before so I don't think it'll come out right. OTL
The shading technique is good though maybe a little too strong around the eyes and eyelids. The color contrast of the teal-ish blue and light yellow are great and draw in peoples' interesting--which is always a great thing. However, the part of the fringe above the center of the nose may be at too sharp of an angle to look realistic. The diamond-like gems on the crown are a nice color but the ones on either side closest to the back may need to be darkened a little to add depth and make the crown appear circular. The left arm (left for viewer, right for character) is thin and look slightly awkward.
I really like the coloring technique and the shades you've used through out this piece and overall this is definitely something you should be proud of. ^^ I hope my comment has been helpful. Good job.
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Cheapcookie In reply to Aricchin [2014-07-25 12:23:37 +0000 UTC]
Oh thank youu! this is so kind of you! i'm really grateful for your awesome critique! be sure it will help me a lot !
you're totally right for everything!Mostly for theshading too strong around the eyes and eyelids. //sigh// i'm not used to do that ;n;
arg, i should have work more on the littles gems on the crown and his left arm too..i'm more a cartoon drawer, i draw my character with really thin arm.. ;n;
however, thank you again, i've found so many mistakes in my artworks thanks to you
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Aricchin In reply to Cheapcookie [2014-07-25 12:28:35 +0000 UTC]
No problem~! I didn't expect such a positive reply, I wondered if I was just being unnecessary or too picky. >.<
You're usually a cartoon artist!? This looks like you've been focusing on semi-realism for your whole artistic career, wow! *o* That's really cool. I like cartoon-style as much as semi-realism so I'm really impressed that you do both so well. ;w;
I'm glad I could be useful~! TuT
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