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Nikolaios [2016-06-01 14:04:47 +0000 UTC]
i couldn't reply in the forum then i'll do it there.
You have a lot of imagination the background must be deepened, add more details don't ignore that.
The hair or the wrinkles under the central shell, the same be more meticulous.
The eyes, if you feel courageous lighten give them irises and pupils.
You can correct your line quality i note it untidy, sorry.
Even these little mistakes nice job.
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Chase-Eel In reply to Nikolaios [2016-06-03 03:57:18 +0000 UTC]
If you don't mind me asking a question about your process: I absolutely loved the line quality on your drawings. Was that ink or really dark pencils? Also how do you do lines? I think my line quality is one of my biggest problems, especially considering I want to draw comics. I generally use a lot of sketchy lines, and erase them before redrawing them more carefully and slowly. You?
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Nikolaios In reply to Chase-Eel [2016-06-03 19:31:33 +0000 UTC]
I use sakura micron thin size or sometimes papermate medium size or pentel sign pen for the moment.
I don't really think about my line quality, but doing more and more outlining using ballpoint pen or marker you learn to do smooths lines, line quality i guess comes to improve when you free you're arm, experience is the key, i'm not a pro but that's my advice for you.
Jerky lines reveals you don't dare loosen you arm and a minor self esteem in your art that's not universal but common.
I recommand you to stop using eraser, we are not on photoshop and not allows you to have control on your work, sorry if not easy to understand.
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Chase-Eel In reply to Nikolaios [2016-06-03 21:41:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I think I'm going to try out more exercises minus my eraser.
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Nikolaios In reply to Chase-Eel [2016-06-04 13:16:49 +0000 UTC]
Do it and return to communicate me how did you feel the experience !
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