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MetalLuke [2019-02-25 16:57:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, I got to admit, I am quite surprised.

It won't so pleasant, but I want to say the negative things first.

Now what Want to point out is that I did ask you to put him in a sunny enviroment. I guess that is why I see all of this yellow hue on him. Although I kinda feel it is too much, but at the same time I feel it is your style and it is quite alright. But I wish that his eye sclera were pale blue, rather yellow. Then again, it does look quite interesting. And wish to see his left eye. I know that due of his big mouth, it is hidden, but at least a hint of it would have been better, rather than completely hidden.

Next thing is that I asked you to make the tip of the staff graduate towards blue, like the reference I gave to you. Which is a shame that it is not there, but oh well.

Lastly I see you highlighted his scales with white marker. Which, I think it would have been better if it were dark blue instead. As well as some dark spots on his face are missing.

Now then, here are the positives. His stance to make looks really well done. His hand indeed looks gentle and his stance is well defined by his character and references I gave to you. You made him slim, which for me suits really good. Especially with his large snout. And I really dig the details on his horns and of all the people, you drew his hair the best. It looks so refined and gentle which I really adore Oh and his facial expression looks really soothing and fits his personality.

And the background looks simple, yet really beautiful.

Overall, I am quite satisfied with this commission, due of it's unique style from the other artists. And as for your first commission, I see you did really good job. Thank you for your work and I hope I can ask some more in the future

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Hoopie-Sprout [2019-02-24 18:08:40 +0000 UTC]

Woa, this is really cool! :0

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