Comments: 19
Otaku3333 [2018-10-04 08:38:43 +0000 UTC]
I love this beautiful artwork so much!~ Jester is my favorite from season 2 and you render her so well!~ Laura Bailey would be so proud!~
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EduartBoudewijn [2018-03-23 06:27:32 +0000 UTC]
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I really like your work here; you did a great job with the general anatomy of the pose and the shading looks very soft, but also very nicely done. I'm personally not all that familiar with the show or the character, but I like the general appeal of your image. The way you framed her with the icon is also very well done and looks neat.
I would say the purple background is a bit off to my taste, but since you originally wanted to make it transparent, I can see that would be more interesting. I'm curious why it didn't work for you; if you keep the background layer in your workfile transparent and save as a PNG in general it'll be transparent on dA as well. Maybe doublecheck your background layer; most programs make it plain white by default, by deleting this layer you can make the background transparent.
Going to her face, I like the general look you gave her, though I feel like her upper lip is perhaps a bit large. Also I would like to see her ears protrude a bit more from her head, they seem a bit thin at the moment. The horns look cool, but I would love to see them a bit thicker, especially at their bases; looking at references of the character, her horns seem like ram's horns more than anything, which are quite thick at the base.
I really like your general texture work on the hair and the horns. They give a nice impression of what they are and are great to look at. Same goes for the eyes really, they are really enchanting.
Perhaps one last thing, I'm a bit confused by the general direction of your shading/light source. The symbol in the back is shaded in such a way where the shading drops down onto it, making it seem like it's a bit of an opening in a wall or something like that, with a light source straight on. The face of the character is also shaded fairly straight on, but her body is shaded from the side instead of straight on. In general the light source isn't that big for a small image just showing off the character in an abstracted way, but it does add to the believability and general appeal of your image.
On a smaller note; with the character being framed by the heart shape, I'm almost getting an M.C. Escher feel; it feels like the character is inside the heart-shaped hole, with the beige/purple colored parts of the symbol being over top of the heart, yet the character being on top of them. It's not too bad a problem, but I think it could be fixed by framing the character with the entire shape of the symbol, rather than just the heart shape. Like I said, it's a smaller thing though.
Still a very nice image you drew here; it looks absolutely lovely. This piece really shows off your skill as an artist and I'm sure that with more practice over time you'll be able to get even better. I hope my pointers and ramblings will be useful for you in this process, and keep up the good work!
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ChaoticMay In reply to EduartBoudewijn [2018-04-06 18:40:27 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, thank you very much for such a detailed comment! Sorry for the late reply, but I really appreciate you taking the time to write this out. You make a lot of great points, I'm not sure if I'll come back to this one but if I ever do, or try anything similar, I will definitely keep these points in mind. Although, I'll probably try to fix the lighting, it's something I always have a problem with. Thanks again!
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W80W [2018-02-08 19:45:02 +0000 UTC]
hi i am from ProjectComment
First of all, I don't know the character or what show or game is she from so i have to look up the character and i think you did well with this Fan art, Though she look more younger compare to the artwork in the wiki that i am looking at. I like how it looks very neat and clean and i can see every details even the hair strands, its also stylish, the heart and bones fits really well with her, the face is really well made and symmetrical, the eyes are well detailed same for her lips and nose, the head look a bit too turned as her chin kinda overlap with her shoulder,though that's just i minor thing that i noticed. Now i am about to point out stuff that could improve the artwork, but keep in mind that it's base on my opinion and preference, you can ignore it if it isn't to your liking So when i first look at it i noticed that it kinda lacks a strong shading and lighting it also doesn't have any highlight and so it looks as if its lacking in depth and it's hard for me to find the light source or if there's even one, i think by adding strong shading/lighting and highlights would improve this artwork by a lot. but other than that this is a fine picture
That's it! i hope wasn't so harsh i also hope that my comment could be of help, Have a great day!
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W80W In reply to ChaoticMay [2018-02-08 22:25:07 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome~
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Naarok0fKor [2018-02-07 21:19:01 +0000 UTC]
The colours look good, I guess that she's a tiefling?
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ChaoticMay In reply to Naarok0fKor [2018-02-07 22:10:44 +0000 UTC]
I think she just leveled up to level 3?
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Naarok0fKor In reply to ChaoticMay [2018-02-07 22:31:46 +0000 UTC]
We usually start at this level...is she going to be a pure cleric or do you plan on adding other classes?
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theJfluffy [2018-02-07 21:12:58 +0000 UTC]
This is very pretty!
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