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Ceol-dKnight — I Will Watch, My Love
Published: 2010-11-18 05:49:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 456; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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Her tears broke his deaf lips.Related content
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I think it's called synaesthesia or something? Where you mix the senses up... I think you've done that quite well with the use of "deaf lips" which is quite creative.
I think you've captured the atmosphere very well, anyway. The third person allows us to judge the two from a separate side, as if we were behind glass looking in...
That's how I feel, anyway.
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Thank you very much. :] I was trying to do that, in a way....
Synaesthesia (or something...) is just that. It's also a name, I believe for a condition in which people associate words, colors, letter patterns, feelings, scents, and/or music with one another. I'm glad you saw that aspect of the phrase.
Thanks a lot. That is what I was going for - to me, it's a rather strong feeling and situation, and I didn't know how well I could capture it in just six words.
Thanks for the comment!
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Haha... I actually just learned this. Pre text, type: 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I do... I very much like this. And the font of the text adds another dimension. I never knew six words to hold so much they could stand by themselves.
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As do I, m'love... Thank you. 
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It is surely my honor to read it. 
(I did think about that...)
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Thank you, my love. But it is truly mine to have you do so, and much more so for you to say such things.
(;])
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It is only true, darling.
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You are most, most welcome.
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