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Hello, hello, hello, everyone. Welcome to to the second redesign I've done so far. Now usually I would've done this with Alternate Glitchtale characters, but the creator asked me to redesign their character, so I said "Why the heck not?". So here's a redesign of ArtisticDreams20 's Oc: Aqua!
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Opinions and Issues
So Aqua... what can I say about him...? Well really there's almost nothing bad I can say about Aqua, he's a well thought out character, and out compared to other Undertale Oc's, he's actually pretty well made character, except for one thing...

... the alternate personalities, specifically Ember, whooo boy aren't characters with alternate personalities confusing, so putting all his personalities together, he's a tsundere, but then he's also a Yandere, Yangire (Whatever the actual heck that is.), and an insane fire guy? Though out of all of them, Ember takes the cake. What is "Past the point of insanity?"? Everybody knows that the highest point of madness is insanity. So my suggestions are: Maybe explain what the whole "Past the point of insanity" thing is, or maybe make the aternate personalities different versions of him in other timelines or something.
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Tweaks and Patches
-I mostly liked Aqua's character, so all that really happened was a design change and some changes to the colors, I used some different shades of blue and aqua.

- I scrapped the alternate personalities because they're kinda uneccesary and confusing.
- "GET OUT OF MY ROOM I'M WATCHING RWBY
- He's actually KAITO from Vocaloid, just going through an emo phase.
- He's played a lot of Yandere simulator and watched a lot of anime, so sometimes, he'll just start geeking out about it. He's pretty much Alphys, except extremely sassy.
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Aqua (c) ArtisticDreams20
Aqua's redesign (c) Me/ArtisticDreams20
KAITO (mentioned) (c) Crypton Future Media

Description

Hello, hello, hello, everyone. Welcome to to the second redesign I've done so far. Now usually I would've done this with Alternate Glitchtale characters, but the creator asked me to redesign their character, so I said "Why the heck not?". So here's a redesign of ArtisticDreams20 's Oc: Aqua!
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Opinions and Issues
So Aqua... what can I say about him...? Well really there's almost nothing bad I can say about Aqua, he's a well thought out character, and out compared to other Undertale Oc's, he's actually pretty well made character, except for one thing...

... the alternate personalities, specifically Ember, whooo boy aren't characters with alternate personalities confusing, so putting all his personalities together, he's a tsundere, but then he's also a Yandere, Yangire (Whatever the actual heck that is.), and an insane fire guy? Though out of all of them, Ember takes the cake. What is "Past the point of insanity?"? Everybody knows that the highest point of madness is insanity. So my suggestions are: Maybe explain what the whole "Past the point of insanity" thing is, or maybe make the aternate personalities different versions of him in other timelines or something.
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Tweaks and Patches
-I mostly liked Aqua's character, so all that really happened was a design change and some changes to the colors, I used some different shades of blue and aqua.

- I scrapped the alternate personalities because they're kinda uneccesary and confusing.
- "GET OUT OF MY ROOM I'M WATCHING RWBY
- He's actually KAITO from Vocaloid, just going through an emo phase.
- He's played a lot of Yandere simulator and watched a lot of anime, so sometimes, he'll just start geeking out about it. He's pretty much Alphys, except extremely sassy.
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Aqua (c) ArtisticDreams20
Aqua's redesign (c) Me/ArtisticDreams20
KAITO (mentioned) (c) Crypton Future Media