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Published: 2010-01-17 00:24:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 426; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 9
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Description Long overdue commission for the amazing miss *melodykenstara of her lovely barkeep Leslie dancing with my mildly deranged ringmaster Valentin. Holy HELL this was fun.
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KasiasDragon [2010-02-11 23:04:43 +0000 UTC]

This is excellent. I love your style, how everything is so bright yet at the same time dark. Love the design too... especially his top hat. And her spats.

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CarnelianKey In reply to KasiasDragon [2010-02-11 23:27:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Bright yet dark is actually what I was going for. Actually, those are his spats XD Leslie has doom boots. Vali, on the other hand, is an elegant sort, even though he occupies a job usually associated with sleazeballs.

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KasiasDragon In reply to CarnelianKey [2010-02-11 23:40:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh, well snap. XD I guess I just didn't look close enough to notice. Oh, backgrounds. How you make me look like an ass.

Vali reminds me loosely of a character that me and a buddy kind of designed on a whim when a butterfly/moth got into my house while I was on the phone with her and was trying to get into my dishwasher. Fred the Vampire.

I'm not sure how a suicidal butterfly and a vampire are connected, but... hey. We're all mad here.

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CarnelianKey In reply to KasiasDragon [2010-02-14 04:03:54 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry, I do the same thing on be-backgrounded pictures. Visual overload or something, I suppose...I initially typed "upload." Lololol I need to sleep more.

Hmmm...longing for light that would kill them upon contact? Wait, no, you said dishwasher @_@ Sorry, I am a dumbass. Oh god, glowing dishwashers. Anyway! What is Fred like? I love hearing about people's characters, and I'm curious as to how Vali reminds you of him.

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KasiasDragon In reply to CarnelianKey [2010-02-16 21:41:45 +0000 UTC]

It's the whole perspective thing. I get into a rush like a nerd and then forget what I'm saying and what I just saw. Laziness forbids me to go back and look until I get called on it.

Hahaha, he was mostly just a blurb... I don't remember much about him. What I do remember, however, is how I pictured him, which is roughly what Vali looks like.

Psh, I've got enough characters to make you want to jump out in front of a bus.

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CarnelianKey In reply to KasiasDragon [2010-02-17 00:51:24 +0000 UTC]

Oh lord I do that too. OH HEY LOTSA STUFF TO LOOK AT I KNOW I LIKE ____________ but scrolling up to check exactly what it is is too much trouble, ehhhh I'm sure I remembered it right. And of course I didn't.

Aw damn XD However, it is encouraging to know that out there is a vampire who is not a pale-skinned black-haired so-goth-s/he-shits-bats individual. I'm thinking of submitting one of my vampires to UnnoticedOC, once I get something of him coloured.

Try me!

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KasiasDragon In reply to CarnelianKey [2010-02-17 02:15:40 +0000 UTC]

EXACTLY. like holy fuck my life there's too much stuff to pay attention to. Ugh.

Indeed. XD I vaguely remember him being mischievious, and had a thing for clocks. He was awesome sauce.

Haha, well, which do you want to hear about? My newest is Cynasism, a paranoid follower of Sickness, a succubus who causes people to kill themselves. Kasia, who's compassion fails her (which ends up allowing Sickness into her body, essentially making her Sickness,) or Drykah, her demon possessed lover. There's Michael, personified death with a jealous streak and Serakon, ruler of Dimonyia or essentially Satan. Razor, who uses his logic to avoid terrible circumstances.... And that's only a few! (My explanation of how Kasia becomes Sickness kind of sucked XD)

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CarnelianKey In reply to KasiasDragon [2010-02-17 07:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Augh man I know how you feel! I try to take days one at a time, but sometimes several of them gang up on me. I wish I could remember where that quote came from.

He sounds like he'd get on with Val, at least in the mischief XD Any chance you might develop him more? The world needs more non-angstbucket vampires.

....hm! Any! All! Your explanation made perfect sense, and now I'm pretty curious about all of 'em, though I warn you I'll blabber about mine in return.

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KasiasDragon In reply to CarnelianKey [2010-02-17 17:40:54 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. Well, that, and I'm lazy and take forever to go through my message box... That doesn't help.

XD I probably should. He was kind of a fun escape into a fun world, where things aren't so dramatic. A little bit of unorganized chaos is always fun. XD

Oh damn straight! I want to hear more about Vali. >:3

Well... Let's see. Long story short, I suppose. God, this is going to sound super gay. It always does when I try to explain it.

I guess the world should sort of be explained first...

In Aorai, their laws are essentially backwards from here. There are kings and queens, however the queen has the dominant power as they show less weaknesses in the race. Dragonketra's are dwindling due to a vampire uprising and cross breeding with other races, leaving very few purebloods. Males are particularly vunerable, as their wings are more sensative and the bases of their tails contain their reproductive organs. (hahaha, humanoid dragons. As if THAT has never been heard of before.)

The vampires (though they're not technically vampires, but whatever) suffer from an extreme form of anemia, caused by the virus that they pass with their saliva. This causes their blood iron to be lower, which forms in them a sort of crazed pica syndrome, in which they crave warm blood. (No one wants it congealed.) I have a whole big theory of how vampires work, but it would take a lot of time to explain.

Basically, Drykah, being the king, needs to find himself a queen and fast, because if he doesn't, he'll lose the throne. Unfortunately, this is not linear with his man-whoring ways. Blah blah blah eventually he finds and marries Kasia, though he doesn't realize at first that she's Michael's sister and therefor Serakon's daughter. Serakon is getting tired of ruling Dimonyia, mostly because he didn't want to rule it in the first place (essentially it being Hell,) .... Oh God, I sound so stupid.

Longer story short, Drykah becomes demon possessed and consumes his and Kasia's daughter, then stabs Kasia through the heart and leaves her to die. Belila finds her dying, finds it convienent that a mortal body is placed before her, so she enters Kasia, causing them both to lose their memories (for the most part), which deforms Kasia into Sickness. Her wings begin to rot away as does her tail, her eyes become covered with cataracts, and she can't stop grinning. Her first victim refers to her as a "Sickness", which is where she got her name.

Shenanigans ensue where Sickness fucks with an angel, she causes a lot of people to kill themselves, and stumbles upon a mortal dying from an arterial spurt, whom she infects with herself, causing him to become something of a half-incubus. (There's more to it than that... Ugh, I hate me.)

Oh God, just tell me about your characters XD I'm sure they're much more interesting.

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annekaretnikov [2010-02-04 06:12:19 +0000 UTC]

yaaayy another scene thing <3

You're getting better all the time with these large pieces. I would still do some research into drawing top hats, but I really really like the rest of his outfit and the style you colored in. Very nice!

He seems sweet! Though that might be an act? I wouldn't know : P

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CarnelianKey In reply to annekaretnikov [2010-02-04 07:40:33 +0000 UTC]

<333 oh man your comments are making my night. I'm gonna have to go back and go through them tomorrow, but for now, yeah, I really do need to use reference for top hats XD I do not know why, since I wear them a lot, but hats confuse the hell outta me to draw.

And yes, Vali's sweet - kind, selfless, empathic, and generous to a fault. He's also a snarky perfectionist workaholic who can't mind his own business. It all comes out in the wash.

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annekaretnikov In reply to CarnelianKey [2010-02-04 17:45:52 +0000 UTC]

I'd say just set it down and start drawing it from different angles. Hats, especially top hats are tricky things that can really get away from you if you don't practice : P

No problem. I like to comment! the difficult part is getting comments! <3

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CarnelianKey In reply to annekaretnikov [2010-02-05 04:43:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah XD That's a damn good idea. Just wait, you'll get a page of hat sketches that have developed little crablegs, and eyes up on stalks. I mean seriously. Hats would make the cutest damned crustaceans and I weirdify everything I touch.

Agh, man do I ever know what you mean D: I'm sorry for my part in that :c

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WritingRin [2010-01-25 04:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Great job drawing and coloring this one! I love the pose! But I keep zoning in on her hair for some reason. xD I really love her hair! And the expression on her face! Actually, the expression on his face too. I feel like I'm really looking at a glimpse of their lives.

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CarnelianKey In reply to WritingRin [2010-01-26 05:17:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It took a long time to get the pose any semblance of right, and I'm sure there are still a million and one anatomical errors, but it proved an extremely enjoyable challenge, and your comment is making me grin hard enough to sprain my face. A glimpse of their lives was exactly what I was aiming for - these two wind up engaged for fifteen years, until his death, but this is the first time they've danced, before they've acknowledged to themselves, far less each other, that they're more to one another than acquaintances who like to get up to rated-R activities on a Friday night.

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WritingRin In reply to CarnelianKey [2010-01-26 13:22:55 +0000 UTC]

xDD Well, that's awesome. ^_^ They look like a very interesting pair! And they have a nice little story!

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CarnelianKey In reply to WritingRin [2010-01-27 03:55:59 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! I think I've told you about Vali some in the past.

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WritingRin In reply to CarnelianKey [2010-01-27 16:57:13 +0000 UTC]

xD Yup!

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MamaLucia [2010-01-24 00:18:21 +0000 UTC]

Cool as hell and creepy as hell. I'm having trouble figuring out the feet, though ...

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CarnelianKey In reply to MamaLucia [2010-01-24 00:25:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! How is it creepy? As for the feet, one of hers is hooked up behind him and the other on the ground. His are both on the ground.

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MamaLucia In reply to CarnelianKey [2010-01-24 01:45:29 +0000 UTC]

She has clunkier shoes than he does!

Thanks, that straightens that out now.

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CarnelianKey In reply to MamaLucia [2010-01-24 05:00:51 +0000 UTC]

Yep XD Leslie has doom-boots, whereas Vali is an elegant bugger. I still wonder why you find this creepy, though.

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MamaLucia In reply to CarnelianKey [2010-01-24 06:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm ... Something to do with the title, I think?

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CarnelianKey In reply to MamaLucia [2010-01-24 21:16:00 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, I suppose that makes sense! It's taken from an extremely catchy song by Flogging Molly, and, though Vali is a bit wicked, he's benevolently so.

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EyelinerAndUmbrellas [2010-01-23 01:54:05 +0000 UTC]

wow. you're really good with colours. this is awesome!

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CarnelianKey In reply to EyelinerAndUmbrellas [2010-01-23 02:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Mostly I just screw around and see what comes out.

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crowfood [2010-01-17 03:30:11 +0000 UTC]

woah barrage of uploads! i love this one! idek why i just love everything about it. :3
the pose, the expressions. *high fives

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hokuto [2010-01-17 03:20:27 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmf, they look gorgeous. *_* Beautiful colors!

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CarnelianKey In reply to hokuto [2010-01-17 03:28:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! The colours were a blast.

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melodykenstara [2010-01-17 01:55:43 +0000 UTC]

*reminds self that squealing incoherently like she has been for the past several minutes is not a word.*

Dear lord I fucking love this. Just.. .WOW. I am SO glad you found it fun to work on, too! It would have kinda bit had you not. God the first things that get my attention are the colors and the motion. It feels to me like a heartbeat taken out of a lifetime, a moment captured perfectly - and knowing that this precise moment is over just after makes it more striking to me. I love the flow of her skirt and the way you have done her hair - the chopstick-look in it is utterly her, when she wants to look nice - and the way her corset causes her clothing to gather is spot on. I love the look of her head thrown back like that, too. She looks to me like some sort of autumnal spirit, there for a passing moment before winter.

And Vali! I love his ringmaster regalia, and he does look both regal and not to me. DEFINATELY impressive. He looks golden and like he catches the firelight, and I find myself focusing now on their hands, how they twine together.

And my god the colors - so much rich color that suits them both so well, as well as the atmosphere! golden firelight effects it all, and the blue of the night sky is striking - but what captures me most are the reds- their clothes seem to complement each other, colorwise. I also like how his clothing seems a bit of a warmer red to her cooler one. It seems to say something about them that I can't quite put to words, yet.

Also, I still really love her knee XD It just strikes me, how the light bounces off of it. AND HER BOOTS, dear lord, she has ass kicking boots, and they look wonderous.

I... I am going to go curl up in a corner of incoherence again.

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eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

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