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And now..a minute of silence for Mr.Mustache no.2. May he rest in peace Other than that...WHOO-HOO, mah first victim of the comic. Yepp, had to give him a proper death. It's an honour, really.Oh Bardock, you tricky lil ape, you.. You never wanted to hit mr. Jellyhead to begin with... Hah. I always liked fights where they used tricks like this one here... if I remember well, Piccolo was the one who often used tactics as such.... Hmm..but correct me if I'm wrong. Anyways...In my head Bardock is a rough n tough warrior, who doesn't have fancy techniques as "MEGA-ULTRA-KAIOH-FINAL-GIGA-DRAGON-CANNON-BALL"..just good old knuckle sandwiches with a couple of simple blasts. Yeah. Maybe it's because he lived in the past when peeps didn't really fancy hip moves as such... or maybe it's just me thinking bout him as a real barbarian dunno. Either way, I like how this scene turned out, I almost ran out of panels, I really-really-really wanted to finish Mr.Mustache just now... Okay.. so here's page 14 for ya, hope you dig it... and if you cant see the logic of the panels, just jump to page 13, you'll see that mr.M is just behind Jellyhead. Makes sense for me... ta, for now

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Hun:

Random katona: - Heh...Mellé...

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És most egy percnyi csendet kérnék elesett barátunk, Bajusz úr no.2 emlékére. Nyugodjék békében... Éééés.. egyúttal hurrá, meg minden, itt az első áldozatom nos, igen. Ez igazából nagy megtiszteltetés, szerintem poén így megnyuvasztani valakit.. mármint ilyen trükkösen. Oh, Bardock...nem is akartad te eltalálni a medúzafejű katonát, te, kis trükkös maki, te... Poén. Mindig szerettem az ilyen fogásokat, ha jól emlékszem, Piccolo csinált néha ilyesmit, de javítsatok ki, ha tévedek. Lehet, hogy csak én vagyok vele így, de Bardockot valahogy úgy képzelem el, hogy nincsen neki ilyen hiperszuper ÜBER-CSILLOGÓ-VÉGSŐ-LABDA-GOLYÓSZÓRÓ-VILLANÁSOS-HŰBELEBUMM- technikája sok-sok felesleges technika-kiáltással, inkább csak igazi fenékberúgással meg ökölszendvicssel él. Meg igazi, parasztos robbantásokkal. Talán azért, mert ő ugyebár a múltban élt, akkor lehet, hogy nem volt divat kitalálni meg elnevezni a csillogó technikákat, vagy talán azért, mert az én agyamban ő egy igazi barbár Alapvetően örülök, hogy így alakult ez az oldal, már majdnem átcsúszott a vége a következő oldalra, mert volt még pár fölös panelem. De már nem akartam tovább húzni, nagyon meg akartam fingatni kettes számú Bajusz urat Hmm.. Aki nem érti a panelek logikáját, az lapozzon egy oldalt vissza, és úgy lehet látni a logikai kapcsolatot, hogy Medúzafej mögött áll Bajusz.. Logikus ez, na...nekem
No mindegy, ím a 14. oldal néktek, egyenlőre ennyi, alásszolgája'....


*Dragon Ball Z characters (c) Akira Toriyama*
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Comments: 137

carlosthemanoflove In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 17:50:51 +0000 UTC]

yeah well, he didn't even have a line....but he has a flashy panel as his death-scene, so he can be proud

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Jessethejester In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 17:10:57 +0000 UTC]

YESSS!!! DESTROY HIM!!! NOW KNEE JELLYBEANBRAIN IN THE GUTZ!!!!!!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Jessethejester [2011-03-06 17:50:17 +0000 UTC]

you'd just love it, huh? XD

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Jessethejester In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-06 18:21:36 +0000 UTC]

YES!!! DESTRUCTION!!!CARNAGE!!!!!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Jessethejester [2011-03-06 18:35:46 +0000 UTC]

Carnage? Nah, that's the foe of spiderman...Id ont see him goof aroudn here XD

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Jessethejester In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-06 18:41:29 +0000 UTC]

...DEATH TO THE JELLYBEAN!!!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Jessethejester [2011-03-06 18:42:46 +0000 UTC]

you kinda hate 'em, right?

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Jessethejester In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-06 18:49:02 +0000 UTC]

N-nooo!!....saiyan power....

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Jessethejester [2011-03-06 18:49:50 +0000 UTC]

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Jessethejester In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-06 18:57:50 +0000 UTC]

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SelphieSK In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 15:48:34 +0000 UTC]

The more I see your style, the more I like it ^^
I really think it's what's making this comic so unique!

Yay for tricky tactics! and RIP Mr Mustache #2 xD

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to SelphieSK [2011-03-06 15:50:41 +0000 UTC]

you mean the "more-looking-at-it" makes it unique? wow...never knew dat XD
Anyways, thank you for the nice comment, and I'll let mrs.Mustache no.2 know that you feel sorry for her loss

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Nei-Ning In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 15:34:07 +0000 UTC]

Woo ho ho hoo! Go, Bardock, Go! Bardock looks so great and badass in this page!

I totally have to agree with you about that what you said about Bardock and his fighting way. Best thing in the fight is your fists Energy balls / blast are okay, but traditional fist fight is much more better. Ahahah, and I really liked this thing in my head -> Bardock, the barbarian ~

I can't believe how much you put effort and time to each page, but your hard work definitely pays off!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Nei-Ning [2011-03-06 15:44:27 +0000 UTC]

Well, he certainly goes for it I'm glad you like the way he operates Hmmm... Bardock the barbarian Xd like He-man or Conan... I could imagine an opening sequence like that...

Anyway thanks for the praising words, I'm touched...but believe me, I don't really put much effort into the pages, it's just for fun, so I don't have a standard to live up to, plus I am rather busy, so I just mash the panels, n' up their go

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Nei-Ning In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-06 15:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Of course I do A man has to know how to fight only with his fists xD AHAHHAHAH!! That is SO great idea! Now that you said that, that Bardock would be like He-Man or Conan... I can't the image out of my mind where Bardock shows up as either of those men

You're welcome
You just... mash the panels and get that great result? I'm jealous >.< XD If I just mash my arts, they look bad and even if I try hard and put effort and time on them, they still look bad XD

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Nei-Ning [2011-03-06 17:49:56 +0000 UTC]

oh relax...every hand draws differently

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Nei-Ning In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-06 18:11:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to Nei-Ning [2011-03-06 18:14:31 +0000 UTC]

that's the point. just stick to that

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drewmaster In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 15:06:42 +0000 UTC]

I've been thinking of making a short comic myself, but I don't know how to make that blurring effect in the third panel on Bardock's arm. If you can, can you tell me a short simplified way of doing that.

Aside from that, your comic is pretty amazing so far. I laughed at the characters' rough features at first, but I cannot deny the skill of your drawing style. It's pretty amazing.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to drewmaster [2011-03-06 15:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you I see you are one of those, who would rather see the comic in Toriyama's stlye and it's fine and dandy I know my "style" needs some time to digest I am really grateful for you comment..

hmm..bout the blurry-things: it is very simple, really: Here's the simplest way I know. If you have the image, that is all ready to go, and it is only the blur you are missing, then just double the layer - of course, I'm talking bout photoshop - and just blur the top layer as much as you wish..and then, just grab an eraser and erase the areas that don't need to be blurry simple as that.

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drewmaster In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-06 16:27:36 +0000 UTC]

Not necessarily. I actually do like your style for this comic. It just took me a short while to get used to it. I was just unprepared for the sudden extreme change from Toriyama's style to yours. You have some real skill though. I wouldn't mind seeing this animated.

Thanks for the tip. I really needed to know that. In fact, it's so simple to do, based on the description, that it's surprising.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to drewmaster [2011-03-06 17:48:54 +0000 UTC]

Animated? whoah Now that's a comment I don't get every day Thank you.
bout the blurry-thing: You're welcome...you know, I am a simple guy, i like simply things...the best things and effects are always simple

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drewmaster In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-07 19:03:53 +0000 UTC]

And it's a comment I don't often give. Only, for it to be a successful animation, the drawing style will have to be consistent throughout. Those few episodes, like in the Cell saga, where they obviously half-assed the style because they didn't want to put in the work to make it as amazing as it could've been, is a good way to destroy or diminish a fan base, or at least raise a few eyebrows. Your style is good enough to be animated in my opinion. In fact, imagine if it was very fluid, with a lot of frames, like Disney movies usually are. I think that might serve your style well.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to drewmaster [2011-03-07 19:14:57 +0000 UTC]

whoa.. I totally get that. I mean the effort n stuff. totally agree..
Hmm... sounds kinda nice...I totally imagined it.. with some minor adjustments, it could work.. thanks for telling me this

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drewmaster In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-07 20:52:08 +0000 UTC]

For instance, let's say ordinarily the animation is fluid, but when there's some really ultra fast brawling going on, that's when the frames are reduced to give it the usual DBZ flavor, but......you don't wanna make it too much like DBZ. When the ultra fast brawling takes place, you would then want to give it a fine tuned mixture of your personal flavor and the official DBZ flavor. A blend of the two to make people say "Wow! I really think I'm seeing something new here!"

I make this sound so easy though. I know it's not. It would be cool though.

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to drewmaster [2011-03-07 21:06:51 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't agree with you more even if I tried

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kibasennin In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 14:40:04 +0000 UTC]

Missed
Guaaaah!
I don't think so, mothafucka!!!

Another Great page... one question, as a fanboy... is the fifth panel ( the one with the hand) copied from Bardocks hand in the third panel?

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to kibasennin [2011-03-06 14:49:05 +0000 UTC]

I see you enjoy Bardock's strategy XD
Thank you..

Uhm, the two hands? nah.. I did make them almost identical though, not to confuse anyone I tried to be as precise as posibble... Even with the small scratches.. It wasn't that hard, I drew the hand on the same page of my excercise book as I did the panel with the two of them

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kibasennin In reply to carlosthemanoflove [2011-03-06 16:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Then you are even better than I tought... It's very difficult to draw two same things...

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to kibasennin [2011-03-06 17:46:49 +0000 UTC]

well that is basically true... but if you use simplified forms with sharp lines like I do with this comic, it is not that hard...the only thing that one needs to pay attention to is the set of angles. I am not an artist, I just sketch a lot

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HomolaGabor In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 14:16:41 +0000 UTC]

Nagyon jóo Látom ezt a kicsi gonosz karakter nem akarod egyhamar eltenni láb alól

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to HomolaGabor [2011-03-06 14:22:58 +0000 UTC]

Nekem semmi közöm hozzá... Bardock döntött így Egyébként köszi, örülök ha tetszik

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OsoroshiiYasai In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 14:15:25 +0000 UTC]

Go Bardock!

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to OsoroshiiYasai [2011-03-06 14:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Well he is "going"

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louvetier In reply to ??? [2011-03-06 14:12:25 +0000 UTC]

I love simple moves, they're also the most effective. Final-giga-canons are overrated. Also, yay for Bardock being cunning! And I kinda feel sorry for Mr Mustache no 2. D:

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carlosthemanoflove In reply to louvetier [2011-03-06 14:24:17 +0000 UTC]

So true... Most of the mega-giga-blasts need time to charge, aaaand while yer opponent is up for teh chargin', you can mash his/her face with a simple knuckle sandwich
Ah, don't be..he had an honorable warrior's death.. reduced to ashes, though...

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